April‚ Thank you for sharing your story. I’ll admit‚ I was hesitant to read it because I hate thinking about funerals. However‚ I wanted to give you some feedback‚ so here I am. 1. To make it seem more realistic‚ I would add dialogue. This ties into your question #3. I don’t think that all stories need tons of dialogue‚ but to me‚ it feels like I’m getting a lot of backstory before I ever see anything from the character’s point of view. Maybe add past of someone’s eulogy? I’ve been to one funeral
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wedding dance by amador daguio reaction paper Bread of Salt‚ as if often noted‚ is Gonzalez’s loving homage to Joyce’s Araby. Both short stories feature young adolescents infatuated with a girl who is oblivious to them. Moreover‚ this puppy love ends in a searing instance of humiliation and realization; made all the more painful by the fact that even in that instant of pain‚ the girl is ignorant of their feelings. Bread of Salt casts this theme though in distinctly Filipino terms. A running image
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Executive summary: Diva Shoes manufactures primarily leather shoes. Diva Sources leather from Italian suppliers and other materials from US suppliers. All materials were cut to the company’s specifications by suppliers and then sent to Brazil for assembly. Diva’s product were sent for sale to most important cities in the world such as Rome and Milan‚ Italy‚ Paris‚ France‚ Tel Aviv‚ Israel‚ Toronto‚ Canada‚ New York‚ Miami‚ Los Angeles‚ and Starting 1993‚ Tokyo‚ Japan. Diva Shoes is a relatively small
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In the Shoes of a Server The clattering of plates and the clicking of heels on a tile floor are the white noise of the restaurant. Kitchen partners rush to get the next salad ready‚ the next steak cooking. The expeditors keep the restaurant working smoothly‚ the source of communication between the front of the house and the kitchen. A business partner shouts “Corner!” as she rounds the bend between the kitchen and the hallway leading to the general area of the restaurant. Two servers see each other
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title Losing someone you love is a horrible experience in anyone’s life‚ especially if it is a parent. Losing both of your parents in a matter of four months is one of the worst things that can possibly happen. I was born in Arizona and lived in my hometown‚ Phoenix‚ until I was three years old. My dad went to jail so my mom‚ sister‚ two brothers and I moved to Chicago because that is where my mom’s side of the family lives. We lived there for four years until my dad got out of jail. My
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A Mile in My Shoes by Katherine Hillman 1 Someone once said‚ you don’t really know a person until you walk a mile in their shoes. Whoever said this must have met many a person like me. Where one’s shoes have been and what they have done can give you a great deal of insight into a person. I think my shoes reveal a lot about me—not only my everyday activities and hobbies‚ but the events that have shaped my inner self. 2 If you closely examine my shoes‚ you’ll notice many things that connect me
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How carefully do you think someone else cares about our privacy? A lot of people in this days talk about privacy. Everyone wants to have there privacy and people want to be anonymous everywhere they go. In almost any official papers you sign you have a note written that you accept the privacy terms and conditions. A lot of people take this papers and just sign them even without reading the annotation. I think not a lot of people care about our privacy or in other words‚ at least I do not believe
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A Brief History of the Bangla Language Movement Mohammad Bari. 1998‚ All rights reserved. 1st Wave September 15‚ 1947 Tamuddun Majlis (Cultural Society‚ an organization by scholars‚ writers and journalists oriented towards Islamic ideology) in a booklet titled State Language of Pakistan : Bengali or Urdu? demands Bengali as one of the state language of Pakistan. The Secretary of the Majlis‚ at that time a Professor of Physics in Dhaka University‚ [Abul Kashem] was the first person to convene
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Have you ever contemplated killing someone? In the story “lather and nothing else” the two main characters both are thinking about killing one another. Since the barber had such an inability to take a life‚ he exhibited great self-control. It also showed how the barber thought by showing how he had a very logical way of thinking. The barber shows self-control multiple times in the story from beginning to end. The barber was in charge of giving Captain Torres a clean shave when doing this it says
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person experiencing sleepwalking normally has a blank stare on their face. When a person is awakened over ninety-eight percent of the time‚ they will not remembered what happened but sometimes they might be able to remember the slightest of them walking or talking. When a person has a sleep episode‚ they might sit up in bed‚ walk to the restroom‚ and even clean‚ or go up and down stairs‚ go outside‚ or even eat. Some people even drive or commit homicide‚ or even are violent. In the end they could
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