tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling mistake you have made‚ so you can change it. I believe that when you peer edit‚ it helps to make your writing that is the best. It also help you learn how to write better sentences and helps you see if the reader understands your point or you need to explain it in another way. When we peer edit multiple times‚ you get to know the opinion of more than one person on your writing. That helps me in many ways
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resources in place to launch the new product after years of research and development. We do not have enough cash for both‚ so the decision here is whether to delay the launch of the new product‚ or choose to allocate the cash to the project. A solution was suggested by the lead developer that we could bypass the new software licensing cost by connecting to his company’s server. It is only a temporary solution so we could have enough time to straighten out the cash flow issue. However the dilemma is that
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Would You Bet Your Life On The Bottom Line? “Thank You For Smoking” is a satirical comedy which is graceful‚ yet brutal. This film targets the pro-tobacco lobbyists‚ who would like the public to believe that smoking cigarettes is not harmful. It stars Aaron Eckhart as Nick Naylor‚ who is the spokesman for the Academy of Tobacco Studies. The opening scene starts with Nick appearing on "The Joan Lunden Show‚" sitting beside a bald-headed boy named Robin‚ a 15-year-old boy dying of cancer‚ but who
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How do you spend your free time? There are many different things which you can do in your free time. Personally I don’t have much free time. I am preparing to my mature exams. However‚ there always happen some free moments on the weekends. I don’t do any especially exciting things then. Sometimes I simply lie on the sofa and watch TV. I like series movies‚ like "Friends". I must admit that I also watch soap operas to entertain. In my mind you cannot learn anything watching TV so I generally choose
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Jasmine Chai Grade 10 196298501 Patterns within systems of linear equations Systems of linear equations are a collection of linear equations that are related by having one solution‚ no solution or many solutions. A solution is the point of intersection between the two or more lines that are described by the linear equation. Consider the following equations: x + 2y = 3 and 2x – y = -4. These equations are an example of a 2x2 system due to the two unknown variables (x and y) it has. In one of
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In the article “You Can Grown Your Brain”‚ the author makes a clear connection stateing‚ with research‚ that the brain can grow with the right “exercise”. The author elaborates what this exercise might be to his audience. Since the article is mostly informational but simply written‚ it is targeted towards those whom‚ with the authors help‚ wish to improve their own IQ. In the beginning the author says the brain is a muscle‚ intelligence is more complex than labeling someone as smart or dumb. It
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Every time I was asked the question “where did you graduate from?” and I would respond that I earned my degree from X College. And they say wow that is a wonderful and well reputed college. It gives me such an enormous feeling inside me when I hear that. Fortunately‚ I had the greatest moment and the best experience when I was undergraduate student. Luckily‚ the schedule of their evening courses accommodated my busy schedule perfectly in a way that I was working full time running my business during
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something people look for‚ but when it comes to power it changes everything to violence. Humanity is cruel and unique in many different ways to make things change‚ that affects many from time when‚ its need of helping others. In the story “The Life You Safe May Be Your Own”‚ by Flanner O’Conner‚ as the story begins‚ and old woman and her thirty-year-old‚ mentally handicapped daughter‚ are sitting on their porch. Tom Shiftlet‚ a wandering one-armed man‚ becomes known with Lucynell Crater. That night‚ the Lucynell
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STUDY GUIDE LINEAR ALGEBRA AND ITS APPLICATIONS THIRD EDITION UPDATE David C. Lay University of Maryland – College Park Copyright © 2006 Pearson Addison-Wesley. All rights reserved. Reproduced by Pearson Addison-Wesley from electronic files supplied by the author. Copyright © 2006 Pearson Education‚ Inc. Publishing as Pearson Addison-Wesley‚ 75 Arlington Street‚ Boston‚ MA 02116. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced‚ stored in a retrieval system‚ or transmitted
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We often forget our priority in our life while we are doing our job. Priority is important for our lives‚ which keep us to maintain the relationship with family members‚ religious faith‚ personal time‚ and culture. The journal named‚ "How Will You Measure Your Life?" in Harvard Business Review‚ which is written by Dr. Clayton Christensen‚ alert about unclear positioning priorities between our jobs and our personal lives. The article mainly emphasized on creating a strategy‚ building a purpose‚ allocating
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