Corporal Punishment should not be allowed My thesis statement is Corporal Punishment should never be allowed in school or at home because it can cause child abuse every year‚ Humiliation‚ and bad outcomes in children. In school if kids don’t do homework they will get paddled‚ and it can lead to bruises. The teachers will even sometimes paddle the student in the same spot and that can lead to back problems. Students won’t go to school when they get paddled because it can lead to humiliation‚ young
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of Manor Farm take the farm over from their master‚ they create seven commandments that are all broken by none other than Animal Farm’s own leaders. Yes‚ all of these are eventually broken‚ but some of them are more prominent than the rest. Thesis Statement: The main commandments that are broken in the book are: “no animal shall drink alcohol”‚ “no animal shall kill any other animal”‚ and “all animals are equal”. Claim 1: The fifth commandment is that “no animal shall drink alcohol”
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Topic: Does the death penalty deter people from committing murder? Thesis Statement: I completely disagree that the death penalty deters people for committing murder. Search strategy and evaluation resources: The start of my research began by investigating the view points of those who believe the death penalty deter people from committing murder. I began with the Gale opposing viewpoints context in the ASA online database which are tools I used to explore current topics that include pro/con view
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Cataclysm Ascribed to Synthetic Fertilizers: A Sentence Outline Thesis Statement: To ensure the preservation of mammalian populations native to North America‚ it is vital for Americans to establish an understanding of what synthetic fertilizer‚ along with acknowledging how its excessive application is cataclysmic for aquaculture and wildlife ecosystems. I. To comprehend the magnitude of synthetic fertilizer effects‚ it is vital knowing what synthetic fertilizer is‚ on a molecular level‚ and how it behaves
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Thesis Statement In most jurisdictions the initial report of rape is made to the police. The law generally requires that reports of rape be investigated; the old idea that only rapes immediately reported be investigated has been abandoned. Law enforcement officers are often trained on appropriate procedures for handling reports of rape but the extent and intensity of training varies considerably. Finally reports of rape can be made by others than the victim including social workers‚ doctors or school
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seashell create a perfect spiral? so how does all this happen… (Another pause…) 2. Thesis statement In nature there is something not visible bi the untrained eye. It happens because there is something in nature called the golden ratio. (Say softly & clearly…). Think of golden ratio as natures secret un~seen Architect! Although I am not a fan of mathematics‚ it’s in everything around you (Pause
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(SCA) in the United States each year” (Sudden Cardiac Arrest Facts). Only 32% SCA victims get CPR because most bystanders do not have training. Training CPR and AED would save lives (About SCA: Sudden Cardiac Arrest: A Healthcare Crisis). b. Thesis statement: Making CPR and AED training a graduation requirement would make students able to help in a SCA circumstance‚ increase the general population of trained life savers contributing to the documented
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class very small bit about media Paragraph 3: Media shows inequality through images Conclusion: Discussion of old regime‚ high cost of living‚ taxes‚ media. My Thesis: The media brought to light the burden of the heavy taxes and debt which lead to an economic crisis and triggered the revolution. Actual Thesis: “Media was used to convey ideas of unfairness between the estates during a stage of the Revolution. There were several causes of the revolution‚ from high bread prices to unpopularity
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productivity‚ and shortened lifespans among the American people (Schoen‚ Doty‚ Robertson‚ & Collins‚ 2010). Healthcare coverage is disproportionate with mainly the poor and minority groups bearing the burden of lack of coverage (DPE‚ 2016). Thesis Statement: The US spends more on healthcare than many other countries yet its citizens
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Thesis Statement: Even with immense wealth‚ Gatsby’s life is haunted by a lack of meaningful relationships along with a distorted view of Daisy and the rest of the world; these weaknesses make him a fragmented character‚ acting as an example of the disillusionment of many people aiming for the American Dream Quote 1: “...the city rising up across the river in white heaps and sugar lumps all built with a wish out of non-olfactory money. The city seen from the Queensboro Bridge is always the city
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