chapter I learned how to revise my draft and improve my essay. Revising my essay took some consideration because you don’t want to cut out too much stuff but at the same time you don’t want to ramble; the reader only needs to know the facts about the topic. It makes some time to revise an essay because you constantly have to read it over and over again to make sure that it sounds right and flows correctly. A key thing to do is imagine yourself as the reader. What main things do you need to know
Premium English-language films Writing Film editing
How to make an effective advertisement There are seven simple steps to follow in order your advertisement to appeal to consumers: 1. Slogan 2. Repetition 3. Bandwagon 4. Testimonial 5. Expert opinion 6. Appeal to the senses 7. Emotional Persuasion Writing an effective slogan. Give it a rhythm‚ rhyme and ring Highlight a key benefit Explain the company’s commitment Stay honest Keep it short Using Repetition. By repeating the name of the product over and over not only will consumers pay attention
Premium Sense Sound Marketing
customers tend to stand out at a fast food restaurant. They don’t know the menu and spend a lot of time staring at it before they’re ready to order. They may ask the ordertaker a lot of questions about items including but not limited to: What all comes on that? How much is that? What comes in a meal? And so on. They may grow easily confused by questions and the routine procedures regarding their order. These customers aren’t particularly known for being rude‚ as they feel out of their element and are relatively grateful for the patience
Premium Restaurant Fast food Fast food restaurant
Feedback ORM Exam January 2015 Overall‚ students’ performance on the Term 1 ORM exam was quite good. The average mark was 56.11. While no marks above 80 were recorded‚ a sizeable number of students achieved a mark of 70 or above. Students that received a mark below 40 tended to have not meaningfully attempted one or more questions. Indeed‚ a number of students did not to adequately manage their time in the exam and failed to provide full answers to each question. Feedback from some students after
Premium Pearson product-moment correlation coefficient Correlation and dependence Question
Rough Draft: Jeffrey Immelt Jeffrey Immelt‚ a genius with the mind of a warrior. During his rise‚ Jeffrey was named CEO when the US was hit hard by the US financial crisis of 2008-09‚ and 9/11 terrorist attacks. Jeffrey is a man in which he decided to make a stand and started looking for ways to grow his company. He decided to remodel the internal systems in the company‚ and decided to look mostly on long-term economic trends in the US. Today‚ Jeffrey’s strategy has change General Electric‚ into
Premium Management China Economics
Comparison Essay Rough Draft When I was young I had no interest in playing sports or going outside just to run around and waste my energy and get all sweaty and stinky. Instead I enjoyed staying indoors and embarking on interstellar missions through the cosmos. Of course I do not mean that I literally did this but I did play video games‚ allowing me to do things that no normal person could hope to do in their lifetime. Now there still are limitations to this and by no means should you not go outside
Premium Mobile phone High school Video game
Rough Draft Andy Truong 11/11/14 Honors ENG 111 Students everywhere may feel pressured into doing well in their course classes in order to receive a higher grade. It may not seem that way in high school but to a college student‚ grades mean everything. Grades are used as motivation for the student to strive for success and in order to be a success‚ they have to work hard for it. But how much can that student take in order to reach the grade that they want? For a college student‚ grades are a vital
Free University Student High school
activity which combines several skills. How to make notes * Read the passage carefully. * Heading What is the main idea of the passage? Frame a heading based on the central idea and write it in the middle of the page. * Subheadings How has the main idea been presented and developed? Are there two or three subordinate/associated ideas? You can frame subheadings based on these. * Points Are there further details or points of the subtitles that you wish to keep in these notes? Indent
Premium
Rough Draft I believe I have grown in communicating ideas because before I would get shy and nervous when I used to go in front of the class to present a project or assignment. I also used to strider a lot. Now when I present in front of the class I’m kind of shy‚nervous but not as much as before. In my experience with the biology project I had to present to pre-k. It was kind of hard because we had to explain everything so that the little kids would understand what we were presenting to them. When
Premium Psychology Writing English-language films
Joshua Schroeder CJ 245 2/28/2013 Rough Draft Work was a very common thing for inmates of early prisons‚ and it is also a common thing even in today’s world. Although the type of work has differed throughout the centuries whether it be manual labor‚ or making license plates the fact is that work has been a major factor in prisons throughout their existence. In the beginning of prisons existing‚ the main type of work was manual labor‚ such as breaking up rocks‚ or even cleaning up the sides
Premium Prison