I think my essay really need grammar correcting and its extent’s very poor. So could you please give me some suggestions? Thank you very much^^! Nowadays‚ there are many people who want to learn English. Do you know the reason why English is widespread all over the world? First‚ English is taught and learned at every school: primary‚ secondary‚ high schools‚ colleges and universities... So if you want to have a good stydying result‚ you’ll need to get high marks in English. Second‚ English’s
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to drink a lot of diet soda. One day‚ I was talking to a friend of mine telling him how hard it was for me to get off the diet soda “thing”. I had to chuckle a bit when he said "Help me! He thought He was finally getting a handle on his weight issue but the sugar was killing him. He said he had an awful day. I won’t even tell you what he ate because it is just so unbelievable. All I will say is that 90% of his food today consisted of sugar! He was a sugar addict! If you see a little of yourself
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Clifford tells the story of a shipowner whose ship sank and drowned all aboard. Clifford things the shipowner is guilty of their deaths even though he sincerely and in all good conscience believed the ship was sea- worth. What do you think? Do you agree with Clifford? Why or why not? Answer: I think that Clifford is absolutely correct in the scenarios that he provided. Quickly‚ Clifford made it clear that the shipowner was fully aware that his ship had not been built well‚ and because of this the ship
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In the beginning soda started out in the pharmaceutical industry where it was meant to solve health problems. Dr. Pepper was the first brand introduced in 1885 as a brain tonic. As a brain tonic‚ it promoted alertness and relieved symptoms of fatigue. Not long after‚ Pepsi Cola and Coca Cola introduced their soda remedies. Originally was named “Brad’s Drink” after the creator but later changed to Pepsi Cola after the main ingredients pepsin and kola nuts. Pepsi was used to assist in digestive
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Soda bottle rocket Purpose The students will investigate the effect of the rocket length upon the distance of flight. The students will also investigate the mass upon the distance flight. Background The students will proof Newton’s third law of motion states that for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. Newton’s third law also applies to rockets. A rocket gets its lift from the gases pushing out of its tail. The force of the rocket pushing on these gases is the action force
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Mofu Lin Ms. Conte 15/3/12 IB Chemistry Soda can calorimeter(Energy content of food) Lab report Introduction We‚ human needs energy to live and for movements. Thus‚ we eat and combust food to release its heat energy in our bodies. In this experiment‚ we will determine how much heat energy released when we eat snack foods such as popcorn or potato chips. This lab includes three burning tests of different foods with different energy contents. Calorimetry is the science associated with determining the
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Reliance Baking Soda Write-Up 1) There are a number of alternatives to reach the objective of a 10% increase in profits for Reliance Baking Soda. a. The first alternative is to increase the price of the product. The suggested retail price for each box of RBS is 10% higher than the actual retail price. I would suggest increasing the price by between 5-10% for the 8 oz. boxes and the 1 lb. boxes‚ as these are the most successful sizes according to the sales volumes in exhibit 5. Additionally‚ 80%
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Business Law Prof: Adam Pincus 12/6/11 Pros and Cons of Philly’s proposed soda tax ‚ if it had taken place In April of 2010‚ Mayor Michael Nutter proposed a tax on soda (and other sweet beverages)‚ in an attempt to try to generate more revenue for the city and curb the city’s growing child obesity issue. The soda tax was an idea to generate millions of dollars in revenue for the city. The tax would’ve added an estimated $77million to the city’s coffers‚ $20 million of which‚ would go towards
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Just in Time‚ is it still a good strategy? The following essay will critically evaluate whether the ‘just in time’ approach to production is still a good strategy and whether it has any implications. The manufacturing approach ‘just in time’ was first established in japan during the mid-1970 by Taichi Ohno and Shigeo Shingo at the Toyota Motor Company. Toyota was one of the first companies to input this approach to streamline its manufacturing and production to minimise the retention of raw
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this ERD is to create a cheap alternative for stain removers in the field of Engineering. The main contaminant we will focus on is grease or oil which is common in machines as a lubricant. The group will focus on using Sodium Bicarbonate or Baking Soda and Oyster. Both of these materials have proven to be effective stain removers with vinegar being 8% acetic acid diluted in water. The group plans on mixing the two ingredients to create a cleaning agent capable of removing grease or oil stains. It
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