The quality of the thesis statement is outstanding as it is a complete sentence and makes a point without moving into the first person like I feel‚ In my opinion‚ and the rest. Furthermore‚ it conveys the topic clearly where the reader gets significant information about what ought to be discussed throughout the paper. Nevertheless‚ the thesis statement needs to outline something interesting that will make the reader salivate and have the urge to continue reading. That is‚ it needs to hold the attention
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and conflict‚ which needed to connect to the thesis statement. In the case of the simple grammar errors‚ there was part of a sentence that did not make sense‚ “...how any individual would be lost‚ attempting to discover their own sense of happiness.” This part of the sentence did not make
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Paragraph 1 My field of study is Medical Transcription. I would like to work in a hospital or from my home. The position would be very busy all the time‚ working with doctors‚ physicians‚ nurses‚ and it can even be busy from my home. The one hospital that I would like to work at is Wyandotte Hospital. It is a wonderful hospital‚ very respected‚ caring‚ and well known. From my home I can work around my schedule and I don’t have someone watching every move I make. The experiences that I have had that
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Achilles and Ajax: The death of Achilles Achilles and Ajax depicting the death of Achilles‚ a Greek black figure amphora‚ currently in the University of Pennsylvania Museum‚ originally found in Orvieto‚ Italy‚ was most likely used as a funerary vessel to be placed on a tomb. In Greek culture it was common to illustrate significant events on vessels‚ including the death of Achilles. Achilles‚ considered immortal‚ was known as the best fighter of his time and his death was a shock to everyone.
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Paragraph 1 Through the years‚ I have had many experiences that make me the ideal candidate for the Customer Service Manager position. The one experience that stands out in my mind is the time I had to help with an extremely dissatisfied customer. I was working in a retail setting as a cashier in the customer service department. I remember this customer like it was yesterday. The customer came to me‚ it was apparent she was angry with an issue that the cashier could not remedy. My main focus was
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LIT 100 Milestone One: Thesis Statement Worksheet 1. Use the following guiding questions to help you develop a thesis statement for an essay based on a story that you can relate to: a. So far in this course‚ what reading have you connected with the most (provide the title only)? Barbie Doll b. Think about the author’s overall intended message or begin to draw connections between the author’s time period‚ culture‚ etc.‚ and the text. I believe the author was trying to show how something like a
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WRITING A THESIS STATEMENT: FIVE QUESTIONS Question Answer 1. What is the general topic? Sports. 2. What is my limited topic? The benefits of tennis. 3.What is my opinion about the Playing tennis is a sport I enjoy limited topic? because of its benefits. 4. What is my purpose in writing I will tell readers what the benefits about this topic? of playing tennis are so that they will have
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GEN/200 Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet Bobby Watson GEN/200 1/26/2012 Jackie Novak GEN/200 Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet Achieving Collegiate Success through Personal Responsibility I. Achieving collegiate success through personal responsibility is your responsibility. My thesis statement is: Even though collegiate success is directly proportional to effort applied‚ we must develop a true sense of purpose and responsibility because individuals
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University of Phoenix Material Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet In this course‚ you will write a 1‚050- to 1‚400-word Continuing Academic Success essay‚ due in Week 5.This essay will help you will apply what you learned in this course and take responsibility for your success in your education and your career. Review the requirements for that assignment. This week‚ using the Center for Writing Excellence resources‚ provide your thesis statement and begin creating the informal
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University of Phoenix Material Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet In this course‚ you will write a 1‚050- to 1‚400-word Continuing Academic Success essay‚ due in Week 5.This essay will help you will apply what you learned in this course and take responsibility for your success in your education and your career. Review the requirements for that assignment. This week‚ using the Center for Writing Excellence resources‚ provide your thesis statement and begin creating the informal outline
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