Overall I liked your write up you did a good job. I did offer some micro and macro suggestions below. I did copy and paste your document into word and it appears to be short of the five and a half page minimum? I also highlighted in red some spelling issues and sentence structure issues for your consideration. 1. What is the writer’s claim? * The writers claim is that asthma should be considered a disability in the workforce. 2. What three reasons does the writer give in support
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What you are doing is looking at the toy in terms of finding what it provides and evaluating whether this provision is good or not‚ in terms of development and other things that support children. Also things like safety‚ price etc. So you could make a checklist of things like is it ?: appealing to children‚ durable safe age appropriate developmentally supportive ( I would elabaorate on this by looking at each developmental area and/or at specific things like how a climbing frame could support
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The works various‚ unique curvy geometric shapes and array of many bright colors makes the work standout. The work immediately catches the eye‚ it is very appealing. Throughout the work there is a variety of vibrant hues such as yellow‚ orange‚ purple‚ green‚ blue‚ turquoise‚ and pink that creates a repetitive geometric pattern. The work uses both primary and secondary colors and combines warm and cool colors to create contrast. With so many creative colors it helps each individual one attract attention
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Many criticisms can be heard or read of the Obama administration‚ especially if coming from the Republicans. But something must be to consider‚ Obama broke with many state policies of Bush Jrs‚ especially in foreign policy towards Latin America. A thorough analysis of whether Obama is more pragmatic and less ideological than Bush jrs. But there is something that differentiates the foreign policy of Obama and his predecessor. Obama seeks to defend human rights and democracy in Latin America‚ seeks
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Hailey Davis JMC - 1013 Introduction to Mass Communications 22nd September 2015 Description: The segment starts out with Bill Whitaker talking about the Cleveland Division’s effect to repair the relationship between them and the community. Bill then is seen interviewing Cleveland Police Chief Calvin Williams‚ where he bluntly asks Williams if there are bad guys in their P.D. Williams answers - “Of course there are. And it’s my job to weed out the bad people from this division..” It is evident
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Joyce Hernandez Martinez Instructor: Carolyn M. Twitter Critique English 102 07 February 2015 Twitter Crtique In the article “Do I really Have to Join Twitter” by Farhad Manjoo‚ he starts out talking about Twitter and how it is becoming more popular rapidly. Manjoo continues on about Twitter and how some people think it is the next great mode of human communication‚ while others say they have a hard time wrapping their heads around the service. Manjoo then asks the reader if Twitter is a fad and
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Critique the “Top-Down and Bottom-Up” Models of Reading and Outline Their Relevance To Reading Instructions Sherry Ann Osborne The ability to read is thought to be fundamentally important for functionality in our modern world. Nations measure the success of educational institutions by the ability to produce highly literate citizens and funding for many educational institutions in the United States and elsewhere hinges on the literacy attainment of student populations. The international
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field of political economy‚ pioneered by figures like Adam Smith‚ David Ricardo and Thomas Malthus‚ whose increasingly laissez-faire theories promoted an extension of exactly the features of capitalism that Marx thought were most defective. Hence his critique ranges from attacks on the complacent liberal bases of capitalism to complex analyses of the economics of the day and of leading theorists. Though he certainly didn’t tackle these themes in any particular chronological order‚ I will tackle them
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A Quantitative Article Critique 1. The study examine the relationship between the emotional social intelligence and academic performance of adolescent mother in Jamaica; the research focal points are as follows I. Socio-emotional interventions that could be beneficial to a cross section of adolescent mothers. II. The study examines the academic performance of teenage mothers by comparison of average to high levels of ESI to those with low levels of ESI. III. The research
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Psychology 1010: CRITIQUE ASSIGNMENT I Purpose: The purpose of this assignment is to familiarize you with peer-reviewed journal articles published in psychological journals. By completing this assignment‚ you will learn how psychologists conduct research and communicate their findings. You will also learn how to critique psychological research. This assignment is worth a possible 50 points. The scoring rubric for this assignment is on the last page of this document. Directions (Part I):
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