Slide 1: Museum Project Information Slide 2: Peloponnesian War was from 431 BC to 404 BC (27 years) and it was Sparta (Peloponnesian Leagues) vs. Athens. Spartans’ leader was Brasidas. Athens was lucky and got Pericles as a political leader as well as a military leader up until he died in 429 BC. Anyway‚ Athens was very good with the sea and ships and attacking that way. While on the other hand‚ the Spartans mainly covered the land. Slide 3: After the Persian War‚ because everything was destroyed
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A more developed country should have citizens that are able to support themselves. A less developed country may have some trouble reaching this goal. Nepal is a less developed country than the United States because of its health‚ education‚ income‚ level of inequality‚ gender inequality‚ and employment. Nepal’s health is not as good as that of the United States. Nepal is only able to supply 94.1% of its population with drinking water‚ while the United States is able to supply drinking water to 99
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lack of organization‚ sentence structure‚ and a thesis statement. Sally’s organization was choppy and unorganized‚ and was filled with detailed sentences left in the wrong order. For instance‚ Sally’s introduction paragraph lacked information that would be given later in the essay‚ and felt more like a first body paragraph rather than an introduction paragraph. Sally also started each paragraph explaining the reasoning behind something‚ rather than beginning with an introduction‚ which can be seen
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Outline Thesis Statement: Tipping should be expected when it comes to paying the bill at a restaurant‚ or bar because the server has to wait and be patient with unpleasant customers‚ they receive little pay‚ and they do their best to make customers’ dining experiences peaceful and enjoyable. Body Paragraph 1: Topic Sentence- Dealing with unhappy customers can be very stressful to a person‚ but imagine having to constantly try and be patient with the person who keeps complaining about every little
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Corey Allen BA504 February 19‚2013 Abstract In 1997‚ Netflix became the first online movie by mail Rental Company. Hastings and Randolph co-founded the company. By 1999‚ they had come up with a $19.99 per month price plan for customer to rent as many movies that they wanted with no late fees. In 2011‚ Netflix shocked their customers with their new price plan by splitting the streamlining of movies to one price and DVD by mail with another price. With the change‚ Netflix lost one million customers
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should be able to create and good and effective thesis statement. To write a good thesis‚ a good topic I could include that on is breastfeeding‚ something I have always been very passionate about. A good narrowed top would be blockages . When it comes to breastfeeding‚ there is a great deal of stress. I know it is not for everyone and I accept this‚ but there are so many woman who are currently breastfeeding who go one with unanswered questions. One being‚ like how to reduce your chances of getting
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Steroids Outline Thesis Statement: The use of steroids has forever changed the world with its adverse effects‚ use in sports‚ and use by adolescents. I. Introduction II. Adverse Effects A. Hormonal Imbalance B. Liver Damage III. Use In Sports A. Use in Bodybuilding B. Use in the MLB IV. Use By Adolescents A. Pressure To Get “BIG” for Sports B. Not Knowing The Side Effects V. Conclusion Steroids Outline Thesis Statement: The use of steroids has forever changed the world with
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Thesis Statement During the renaissance time‚ the world set its mind on inventions. From Europe‚ all the way to china‚ people’s lives were to never be the same again. Many inventions made things easier. For instance‚ the invention of the compass made it easier for marines and travelers to set on to their traveling journeys without worries of getting lost. People were very creative and there was almost a general decision on making sure that the latest inventions were easier to use than the previous
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any writer is to develop a solid thesis statement. The thesis statement is where the writer points out their main idea of a topic as wells as their claims. Developing a thesis statement is not an easy task but there are guidelines that would make it easier to developed. Good advice according to (The Little Seagull Handbook) is to make the topic a question and then answered. Also being authentic with the idea is a good way to develop a solid thesis statement. Paul McHenry Roberts “How to
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from these events‚ teaching you more about yourself and the task in which you are attempting to be successful in‚ and there is no better teacher than failure. Like everyone else‚ failure has played a large part in my learning process. Teaching me a lot about myself‚ and also teaching me how to make myself better. One of the main areas I have used my failures to better myself has been in my athletic career‚ weather it is boxing‚ racing‚ or basketball‚ failure has been a constant motivator in my ultimate
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