6.10 Document for Analysis – Poorly Written E-Mail Message‚ p. 141 Your task. Study the following message. In teams or in class discussion‚ list at least five specific weaknesses. If your instructor directs‚ revise to remedy flabby expressions‚ long lead-ins‚ there is/are fillers‚ trite business expressions‚ clichés‚ slang‚ buried verbs‚ lack of parallelism‚ and general wordiness. Look for ways to improve readability with bulleted or numbered points. To: Marcy Love <marcy.love@sokia
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Example of a Poorly Written Report “Loose Bolts?” February 30‚ 1973 The film "Loose Bolts?" is an analysis of what became known as the Lordstown syndrome by business week magazine. Interviews with workers‚ foremen‚ and union officials in this film show how a bored and dissatisfied works turns out cars (Chevy Vega’s) with major flaws. I recommend this film to anyone interested in the study of worker attitudes. - Paul Marshall‚ Professor of Management‚ Harvard Business School
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A Resilient Architecture for Automated Fault Tolerance in Virtualized Data Centers Wai-Leong Yeow‚ C´ dric Westphal‚ e and Ulas C. Kozat ¸ DoCoMo USA Labs‚ 3240 Hillview Ave‚ Palo Alto‚ CA 94304‚ USA e-mail: wlyeow@ieee.org‚ {cwestphal‚kozat}@docomolabs-usa.com Abstract—Virtualization is a key enabler to autonomic management of hosted services in data centers. We show that it can be used to manage reliability of these virtual entities with virtual backups. An architecture is proposed to autonomously
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A Community Assessment Inside the Breast Clinic at Roswell Park Cancer Institute A Community Assessment Claudia Ames Empire State College Table of Contents Inside the Breast Clinic at Roswell Park Cancer Institute 1 Claudia Ames 1 Empire State College 1 Table of Contents………………………………………………………………………………….2 Introduction………………………………………………………………………………………..3 Community Overview……………………………………………………………………………..4 Windshield Survey……………………………………………………………………………..….6 Epidemiology……………………………………………………………………………………
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Breast Cancer Treatment Only lung cancer kills more women each year in the United States than breast cancer does. The American Cancer Society (ACS) estimates that over 184‚000 new cases of breast cancer were diagnosed in women in 1996 (ACS Breast). Although these statistics are alarming‚ there are a number of treatment options available for those that are diagnosed with breast cancer. The best way to treat any disease is to prevent it. Since little is known about breast cancer‚ there are no
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According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC)‚ chronic illness‚ such as obesity‚ heart disease‚ and cancer are among the most common and costly health problems associated with the elderly‚ they are also among the most preventable (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention‚ 2010). Because chronic diseases are the driven force behind the increase in health care and prescription cost for the elderly‚ programs such as wellness and chronic disease management programs can help reduce
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Destruction by decision In the crucible (1953)‚ the author‚ Arthur Miller demonstrates how the bitterness of others can ruin an entire town. During the witch trials in Salem‚ the condemned were only given two choices; they could give up the names of others who were possessed with the "evil spirit" or they would be hung. In Salem‚ there were many cases where many were accused just because of a grudge. Are people that hateful‚ they use personal grudges to their advantages? Throughout the crucible
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Pain center waiting room design: An exploration of the relationship between pain‚ comfort and positive distraction. by Heather Draper A Thesis Presented in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree Master of Science in Design PR EV Approved April 2012 by the Graduate Supervisory Committee: Diane Bender‚ Chair James Shraiky Gerri Lamb ARIZONA STATE UNIVERSITY May 2012 IE W UMI Number: 1508585 All rights reserved INFORMATION TO ALL USERS The quality of this reproduction
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To start off‚ I will explain what cancer is. Cancer is a disease caused by an uncontrolled division of abnormal cells in the human part of the body. The normal body is made up of millions of living cells. Normal body cells grow‚ divide to make new cells‚ and die in a logical way. Cancer begins to start when the cells continue to grow out of control. The cancer cell’s growth is unlike the normal cell growth‚ instead of the dying cells‚ the cancer cells continue to grow and form new and now abnormal
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Pepper Component Hot Enough To Trigger Suicide In Prostate Cancer. Let’s first understand what prostate is and who does it effect and target. Symptoms and possible known cures. The prostate is a gland found only in males. It is located in front of the rectum and below the urinary bladder. The size of the prostate varies with age. In younger men‚ it is about the size of a walnut‚ but it can be much larger in older men. The prostate’s job is to make some of the fluid that protects and nourishes
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