the main strength is in the idea of the essay itself‚ which gives a good base to explore ideas. I think that the argument is original‚ as well as thought provoking. 3. An aspect of the essay that could use work is in the analysis. If more attention was brought towards the moral aspects which were lost‚ the paper would be very well written. **Elaborate on the specific things which were lost in the story as each new version came out*** 4. The essay is debatable and compelling‚ for it uses
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Cigarette Smoking and Its Health Risks. Why do I need to know about the health risks of cigarette smoking? Cigarette smoking is the most preventable cause of illness and death. Cigarettes are filled with nicotine‚ which acts like a poison in your body. What are the health risks of cigarette smoking? You may have breathing problems that make it difficult for you to do daily activities or play sports. You have a higher risk of bone fractures because smoking can cause osteoporosis (brittle bones). If
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Dot-com bubble The dot-com bubble was a historic speculative bubble covering roughly 1997 – 2000 (with a peak on March 10‚ 2000 during which stock markets in industrialized nations saw their equity value rise rapidly from growth in the Internet sector and related fields. While the latter part was a boom and bust cycle‚ the Internet boom is sometimes meant to refer to the steady commercial growth of the Internet with the advent of the World Wide Web‚ as exemplified by the first release of the Mosaic
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XXXX COM 201 Media Essay 2 11/16/12 Video games seem to be an essential part around my friends’ circle. Unfortunately‚ I have never been one of them‚ but since my brother is a huge fan of video games‚ I can say I grew up around a video games’ world. As I remember‚ my brother played video games in every minute and second. I believe you must wonder why I could insist not to play. The truth is I was too afraid to be addicted to those games. I knew I was like my brother. I have seen all the consequences
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David Gill COM/105 Analyzing Written Essays • What are the four types of essay organization discussed in the course readings? What characteristics make these essays expository? The four types of essay organizations discussed in the course readings are topic‚ time order‚ space order and informative process. The characteristics that make these essays expository are a defined thesis in the introduction‚ evidence in each paragraph to support the thesis‚ information presented in a non-biased
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Week 1 COMM 155 Week 1 When writing a paragraph explaining what I would hope to accomplish in COMM 155‚ I would begin by stating the four elements of a successful essay. I would begin by stating my topic in the first sentence while keeping in mind my audience which would be my professor so the tone that I would use would be formal as with any academic writing. The purpose of the topic is to see what knowledge I have learned in class so far and what my understanding is on this topic. The content
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Analyzing Written Essays COM/150 The four types of essay organization discussed in the course readings are expository‚ persuasive‚ analytical and argumentative. The characteristics that make the essays that I read expository are both provided evidence‚ examples and facts to inform about the topic with a thesis statement as its base. The information was also presented fairly and in a nonbiased manner. For example‚ in the essay titled “How to Succeed as an Online Student”‚ it informed me
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.COM Failure Marketing and the .COM Bust Why Marketing? The .COM bust‚ the .COM “bubble”‚ the failure of companies that “dot-bombed”‚ happened more than a decade ago‚ but the lessons learned are important for the present tech sector. Many investors argue that we are in a bubble now‚ with companies like Instagram selling for $1 billion and hundreds of others getting million dollar valuations. Looking back‚ it’s clear from a marketing perspective current aspects of the products and websites themselves
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life”‚ one student said that ABC News Primetime was interviewing for a story called‚ ‘A Cheating Crisis in America’s Schools’. They found in a 2002 confidential survey that out of 12‚000 high school students‚ 74 percent admitted to cheating on an exam at least once during their academic experience. Those numbers show no signs of stopping anytime soon; and it’s not just high school students cheating‚ college students‚ even those privileged enough to attend ivy leagues‚ are also getting their hands
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Adrian Hall COM 200: Interpersonal Communication After reading the article “Close Relationship Sometimes Mask Poor Communication” it made me realize that I and my wife have poor communication skills. We been together for a good two years and we still haven’t gotten the proper communication between each other. She likes to be rude and cut me off while I’m trying to prove a point because she always thinks she’s right when clearly at times she’s wrong but won’t admit it. She always wants materialistic
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