SMARTHINKING’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing SMARTHINKING’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he
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Checkpoint: Internet Databases Crystal Weathers HCR/210 October 7‚ 2011 Lyndsey Jacobs I think that the benefits of having medical information electronically stored in an internet database can be many things. One of the major benefits would be if something happened to you or a loved one and the ambulance needs to pick them up‚ they can have access to your information. This can in turn help save your life. The information is already in the database in the event that you do not remember or
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Sashika agreed with a sigh. She had no other option since his blood was slowly wearing off and her thirst was building up again. She knew that if his blood wears off and there was nothing to replace it‚ something’s bad going to happen. She followed his eyes while he was riffling through the crowd where her eyes stopped at the same man. She gulped as she continued to stare. And while he was pulling her eyes wouldn’t set off of the man till Hiroshi grabbed her attention again. "Hai..be careful Hiroshi"
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The human side of management is setting an example of using leadership roles for the organization‚ and guiding employees to set common goals. Management also is known for making the work environment suitable for their employees so they are happier and more efficient when they are working on projects‚ or deadlines. It is an important role of management to finding those who are qualified‚ and trained for the establishment while helping employees to improve during their time of employment. Managers
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SI can remember that day when I was ten years old. I was going to the primary school with my friends by bus as every day in the morning. On that day‚ I leaved home at six a.m. and got to the bus. After that‚ I saw a strange man was following us in his car. He was about 40 years old with dirty clothes. Before we arrived to school he had shouted‚ "stop stop stop the bus" to the driver and he tried to stop our bus. So he hit the front of the bus by his car. After five minutes the bus stopped totally
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Summary: Travel writer Bill Bryson and his friend Stephan Katz are hiking along the Appalachian Trail when it begins to snow. They cross narrow ledges and slip and slide across streams. It takes them two hours to cover sixtenths of a mile. Finally‚ they come to the bottom of Albert Mountain. They cannot go up‚ and they cannot go back. Bill finds a logging trail marked on his map. They plod up the road through the snow. At last they find the Appalachian Trail again. They know that they are close to a shelter
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Friday‚ December 24‚ 8:40 a.m. Christmas Eve - today’s going to be insane. When I got up this morning‚ it was snowing heavily. The sight made me tingle with excitement. Pumping with adrenaline‚ I fixed myself a cup of water and took a quick wash. I lay down on my snug bed pondering over what to put down for my Christmas list... Life was hard here in Serbia ever since my mum died. Nothing was the same. No more clean water‚ no electronic luxuries and a huge shortage of money. I had to often help
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Skylar Addicks’ Biography Cute one: Skylar Addicks grew up in the cutest little town called Wylie‚ Texas. If anyone actually knows where that is‚ she will buy you lunch. Skylar will be graduating in May 2015 from Texas Christian University with a degree in Mechanical Engineering and Mathematics. Why did she choose engineering? Because solving math and science problems was actually kind of fun for her‚ which her brother always thought was weird. Nevertheless‚ Skylar is looking forward to what
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Do you think marketing research in Bangladesh in recent era is adequate? If your view Market research involves collecting‚ recording and making sense of all the available information which will help a business unit to understand its market. Market research sets out to answer the following questions: (i) who makes up the target audience? (ii) what do they want? (iii) when do they need it? (iv) where does it sell best? (v) how can it be taken to them? (vi) why do they want/need
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Gary Torry English II July 16‚ 2013 Drill or No Drill? The National Artic Wildlife Refuge (NAWR) is home to many animals‚ such as: moose‚ caribou‚musk oxen‚wolves‚foxes‚ grizzlies‚ polar bears‚ and migratory birds. Leaders in the oil industry‚ however‚ believe that the refuge is the perfect site for the “environmentally sensitive exploration” of oil. Environmentalists are wondering: What will become of
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