A Doll's House Thesis
Hello Madison,
First of all, I would like to state that you have a great start here. I think that you are doing great with the analysis. The thesis statement is clearly defined, making the argument very clear throughout your essay. I think you essay stays very focused on the agreement made in the thesis. The way you summarized the song “Goodbye Earl” is very well written, of course “A Doll’s House” summary needs a bit more information but you stated that already. I think you should make another paragraph comparing and contrasting both the song and the play. I believe adding that paragraph it will make readers have a better understanding of your side of argument. There are a few spelling and grammar errors made throughout your rough draft.
First of all, I would like to state that you have a great start here. I think that you are doing great with the analysis. The thesis statement is clearly defined, making the argument very clear throughout your essay. I think you essay stays very focused on the agreement made in the thesis. The way you summarized the song “Goodbye Earl” is very well written, of course “A Doll’s House” summary needs a bit more information but you stated that already. I think you should make another paragraph comparing and contrasting both the song and the play. I believe adding that paragraph it will make readers have a better understanding of your side of argument. There are a few spelling and grammar errors made throughout your rough draft.