Abandoned Warehouse-Dawn Monologue
Fade in:
Ext. Abandoned Warehouse - Dawn.
On the outskirts of Los Angeles, an abandoned warehouse provides sanctuary for three criminals on the run.
Dissolve to:
Int. Abandoned Warehouse - Dawn.
Shaun, a young man in his late teens and mixed in with the wrong crowd, ambles over while pointing a gun at a hostage's head, shaking as he does it. Shaun
Hey guys, I really think we should turn ourselves in, this isn't me. Ricky, a manipulative, egocentric psychopath in his late 20's dawdled over, with a gun by his side. Ricky
Look who's bitching out now just like I said he would. Donny, a man in his late 40's and the 'mastermind' of the group, enters the scene will puffing on a cigarette. Donny
This is no time for weakness Shaun, we have …show more content…
How about I put a bullet in each one and save everyone the stress? Donny
You're a real genius aren't you Ricky? Answer me this then…How will we get out without being caught? Shaun, now in a very emotional state. Shaun
Guys! I'm going to turn myself! And can't just wait around here for a chopper that more than likely won't come! Ricky
Shut up Shaun! Ricky, now turning back to Donny. Ricky
We just make a run for it. I saw a speed an old Camaro out the back, I could hotwire it and then we'll be home free. Shaun, now getting close to breaking point.] Shaun
Why aren't you listening to me?!?!?! Donny
Just point the damn gun at the hostages Shaun! Donny returning to his argument with Ricky. Donny
That is without a doubt the dumbest idea I have ever heard. We are completely surrounded. We would not last 5 minutes outside this Warehouse if we don't have any hostages. Ricky
Shut up old man! Give me the money! I'm out of …show more content…
Donny's lifeless body hits the cold, hard concrete. Without even thinking, Shaun leaps onto Donny, and crash tackles him to the ground, knocking the gun out of Ricky's hand. Shaun
Why'd you do that Ricky?! We could have turned ourselves in and everything would have been alright! Ricky manages to roll Shaun of his back and begins to choke him. Ricky
You were always weak Shaun! You never had what it takes to pull off this job! Shaun, now close to losing consciousness, elbows Ricky repeatedly in the stomach. He breaks free of Ricky's hold and dives for the Gun. Having the gun in his grasp, Shaun rolls onto his back. Simultaneously, Ricky's leaps towards Shaun. A gunshot rings throughout the warehouse. Ricky gets to his feet, looking down at the hole in his chest. Ricky
There could only ever be one. Shaun gets to his feet, removes the blindfolds and rope from the hostages, and walks to the exit with a bag of money in his hands. As the door opens, he was met by at least 50 police officers, and stared down the barrel of a rifle. Police Officer #1
Drop the bag, put your hands behind your head, and lie face down on the
Ext. Abandoned Warehouse - Dawn.
On the outskirts of Los Angeles, an abandoned warehouse provides sanctuary for three criminals on the run.
Dissolve to:
Int. Abandoned Warehouse - Dawn.
Shaun, a young man in his late teens and mixed in with the wrong crowd, ambles over while pointing a gun at a hostage's head, shaking as he does it. Shaun
Hey guys, I really think we should turn ourselves in, this isn't me. Ricky, a manipulative, egocentric psychopath in his late 20's dawdled over, with a gun by his side. Ricky
Look who's bitching out now just like I said he would. Donny, a man in his late 40's and the 'mastermind' of the group, enters the scene will puffing on a cigarette. Donny
This is no time for weakness Shaun, we have …show more content…
How about I put a bullet in each one and save everyone the stress? Donny
You're a real genius aren't you Ricky? Answer me this then…How will we get out without being caught? Shaun, now in a very emotional state. Shaun
Guys! I'm going to turn myself! And can't just wait around here for a chopper that more than likely won't come! Ricky
Shut up Shaun! Ricky, now turning back to Donny. Ricky
We just make a run for it. I saw a speed an old Camaro out the back, I could hotwire it and then we'll be home free. Shaun, now getting close to breaking point.] Shaun
Why aren't you listening to me?!?!?! Donny
Just point the damn gun at the hostages Shaun! Donny returning to his argument with Ricky. Donny
That is without a doubt the dumbest idea I have ever heard. We are completely surrounded. We would not last 5 minutes outside this Warehouse if we don't have any hostages. Ricky
Shut up old man! Give me the money! I'm out of …show more content…
Donny's lifeless body hits the cold, hard concrete. Without even thinking, Shaun leaps onto Donny, and crash tackles him to the ground, knocking the gun out of Ricky's hand. Shaun
Why'd you do that Ricky?! We could have turned ourselves in and everything would have been alright! Ricky manages to roll Shaun of his back and begins to choke him. Ricky
You were always weak Shaun! You never had what it takes to pull off this job! Shaun, now close to losing consciousness, elbows Ricky repeatedly in the stomach. He breaks free of Ricky's hold and dives for the Gun. Having the gun in his grasp, Shaun rolls onto his back. Simultaneously, Ricky's leaps towards Shaun. A gunshot rings throughout the warehouse. Ricky gets to his feet, looking down at the hole in his chest. Ricky
There could only ever be one. Shaun gets to his feet, removes the blindfolds and rope from the hostages, and walks to the exit with a bag of money in his hands. As the door opens, he was met by at least 50 police officers, and stared down the barrel of a rifle. Police Officer #1
Drop the bag, put your hands behind your head, and lie face down on the