ACOM 103essay Plan 
-- ASSIGNMENT 1
INTRODUCTION AND ESSAY PLAN
ESSAY TOPIC: In response to concerns about obesity and weight-related health issues, there are a number of approaches to weight loss on offer. Compare and contrast a more traditional approach to weight loss, such as a healthy diet and exercise, with a surgical procedure used for the purposes of losing weight. Which is more effective in achieving and maintaining a healthy weight?
INTRODUCTION
Thesis statement: This essay will focus on comparing and contrasting whether a traditional method to weight loss or a surgical approach such as bariatric surgery is better for human health and suggest that ,considering the long term health condition,the traditional approach is more beneficial .
BODY A. Traditional approach to weight lose is the healthiest way . (Markey, 2013) 1. Maintain healthy lifestyle 2. Burn fat and prevent disease
B. Surgical method is another way to lose weight loss but it has disadvantages.(Markey, 2013) 1. Regain weight quickly. 2. Undertake the risk of complications. C. Metabolism plays a crucial role in the process of losing weight.(Lange,2014) 1. Exercising not only promotes the speed of metabolism but boosts brain power 2. Surgery may decrease the speed of digestion and lead to heart disease. D. If the behavioral strategies do not work, some people will choose gastric bypass surgery ,but it has several drawbacks.(Lange,2014) 1. Cost expensive 2. Problems into individual gastrointestinal system
CONCULSION In conclusion, traditional method is the safest and healthiest way to lose weight and to maintain a long term outcome. Share some alike: both principle is to lose weight effectively
Differs:
Fast versus long term
Risk versus safety
文章body 部分大致需要五段来对比traditional way /surgical procedure。 都具体包括哪些方式以及手术名称 效果等
每段的topic sentence 后要加evidence.
Conclusion 要对比哪个方式好 和critical thinking.
Reference list:
INTRODUCTION AND ESSAY PLAN
ESSAY TOPIC: In response to concerns about obesity and weight-related health issues, there are a number of approaches to weight loss on offer. Compare and contrast a more traditional approach to weight loss, such as a healthy diet and exercise, with a surgical procedure used for the purposes of losing weight. Which is more effective in achieving and maintaining a healthy weight?
INTRODUCTION
Thesis statement: This essay will focus on comparing and contrasting whether a traditional method to weight loss or a surgical approach such as bariatric surgery is better for human health and suggest that ,considering the long term health condition,the traditional approach is more beneficial .
BODY A. Traditional approach to weight lose is the healthiest way . (Markey, 2013) 1. Maintain healthy lifestyle 2. Burn fat and prevent disease
B. Surgical method is another way to lose weight loss but it has disadvantages.(Markey, 2013) 1. Regain weight quickly. 2. Undertake the risk of complications. C. Metabolism plays a crucial role in the process of losing weight.(Lange,2014) 1. Exercising not only promotes the speed of metabolism but boosts brain power 2. Surgery may decrease the speed of digestion and lead to heart disease. D. If the behavioral strategies do not work, some people will choose gastric bypass surgery ,but it has several drawbacks.(Lange,2014) 1. Cost expensive 2. Problems into individual gastrointestinal system
CONCULSION In conclusion, traditional method is the safest and healthiest way to lose weight and to maintain a long term outcome. Share some alike: both principle is to lose weight effectively
Differs:
Fast versus long term
Risk versus safety
文章body 部分大致需要五段来对比traditional way /surgical procedure。 都具体包括哪些方式以及手术名称 效果等
每段的topic sentence 后要加evidence.
Conclusion 要对比哪个方式好 和critical thinking.
Reference list: