It would not look seem real.
Thus, the non-‐standard English helps to make the character more interesting and gives the reader a more intimate understanding of the grandmother’s Chinese-‐American culture.
Janis Marchant 11/12/11 4:00 PM Comment: Misspelling: descent
Comment: Put this in the header.
Janis Marchant 11/12/11 3:17 PM Comment: Indent one-‐half inch when starting a new paragraph. Janis Marchant 11/12/11 3:58 PM Comment: This is redundant; you said it in the first sentence.
Janis Marchant 11/12/11 4:10 PM Comment: This is a fragment and unneeded. Janis Marchant 11/12/11 4:11 PM Comment: Use the word to in the infinitive. Janis Marchant 11/12/11 4:12 PM Comment: Preposition: in Janis Marchant 11/12/11 4:16 PM Comment: