While this was what I firmly believed, and to a large extend still do, I chose the wrong way to argue this. No human ever likes to be told that they are selfish, and that when they help another, the only reason they do it is because they get a psychological benefit from it. After learning that the best way to argue is to first get the audience on your side, I wrote my second paper. In my second paper, I first attempted to get the audience to my side by dropping the long held norm of excluding words like “we” and “you,” these words, while somewhat informal, are more representative of day to day speech, and by lowering the formality, allow for a deeper and more personal connection. I also purposely lowered the vocabulary, as that too allowed me to get closer with my audience, and remove any barriers that a higher lexicon might have
While this was what I firmly believed, and to a large extend still do, I chose the wrong way to argue this. No human ever likes to be told that they are selfish, and that when they help another, the only reason they do it is because they get a psychological benefit from it. After learning that the best way to argue is to first get the audience on your side, I wrote my second paper. In my second paper, I first attempted to get the audience to my side by dropping the long held norm of excluding words like “we” and “you,” these words, while somewhat informal, are more representative of day to day speech, and by lowering the formality, allow for a deeper and more personal connection. I also purposely lowered the vocabulary, as that too allowed me to get closer with my audience, and remove any barriers that a higher lexicon might have