1) Topic sentence 1: The causes on baby dumping have an extremely negative and widening effect on the society. It will be mimicked by others instead especially youngsters. 2) Supporting Details: Example of the influence from the television also mimicked by the teenagers proves that baby dumping also give bad influences, following by easy come and easy go attitude.
B. Paragraph 2: 1) Topic sentence 2: Baby dumping issue effect abortion and harm the mother’s body too. 2) Supporting Details: High risks following by nonstop bleeding in the uterus which can cause the woman unconscious or worse death after abortion. Prof. Dr. Harlina Halizah Siraj as professional consultant Gynecology of Hospital UKM said this illegal abortion could cause harm to the mother because it does not follow the proper procedure by the professions.
C. Paragraph 3: 1) Topic sentence 3: Baby dumping issue affects the infant from growing in physically and mentally healthy. 2) Supporting Details: The baby grow with full of hatred and having difficulties to go to school because without birth registration. Besides that, they have problem when they want to get married too because there is no guardian.
III. Conclusion. 1) Restatement: Take the drastic step of categorizing the baby dumping case as a criminal act counted as murder. Society, individual, government, religion and education are the major factors causing this issue. 2) Prediction or issue in broader
References: Halimah Mohd Said, Baby Dumping a Monstrous Act (Malaysia: http://thestar.com.my, 19th August 2010), 1st. Subsequent Reference: Mohd Said, Baby Dumping a Monstrous Act, 1st. Bibliography: Mohd Said, Halimah. Baby Dumping a Monstrous Act, Malaysia: http://thestar.com.my, 2010. TURNITIN REPORT : http://turnitin.com/newreport.asp?r=86.5227102527502&svr=12&lang=en_us&oid=146404459&ft=1&bypass_cv=1