Chinese Cinderella by Adeline Yen Mah
Practice Essay
In the autobiography ‘Chinese Cinderella’ by Adeline Yen Mah, a main character that will be described is Adeline herself, as she is such an inspirational person. This essay will describe Adeline’s personality traits, being strong willed, loyal and courageous.
Adeline’s personality traits were shown while being strong willed and being voted as the class president at a very young age. ‘Why should your classmates bring you gifts? Niang asked suspiciously.’ It‘s because we won the election today. I’m now class president. We worked hard at it...’ Although Niang was being unfair, Adeline was still very determined to make her family proud and go on winning the respect she deserved. ‘I must study harder and go on wearing this medal so I can go on pleasing father.’ Adeline was also being strong willed when her siblings were asking cruel Niang for tram money, but Adeline wouldn’t because she was determined to prove that she was old enough and responsible enough to travel to school by herself although it was a long walk. ‘There is obviously nobody looking out for me. I’ll just have to find my own way.’ These are perfect examples of Adeline showing that she is strong willed because she is determined to do things true no matter what other people do or say.
Adeline’s personality traits were shown while being a loyal person and being loyal and loving to PLT also known as Precious Little Treasure, her baby duckling. ‘I took the duckling to my heart. For the first time, I had a pet of my very own. At school, I proudly described my duckling to my classmates. As I spoke, I felt a warm, tender glow spreading all through me.’ PLT was Adeline’s pride and joy; she had loved her duckling ever so much. Adeline was extremely loyal to her duckling and would do anything for the duckling. ‘I couldn’t wait to rush home from school, carry PLT wandering between the beds and my desk. It