This was fine sport” (Aaron and Kuhl 74). My initial reaction was that it was “just okay” but as I continued to read, the narrative drew me in further as Dillard continued to describe her background story of how she was something of a tomboy and set the stage for what was about to occur in a child’s point of view. What I had considered a tolerable introduction, quickly escalated to the part where Dillard spoke of making an ice ball that carries the story back to the start where she describes how she had a “boy’s arm” when it came to throwing a baseball. The actions taken by Dillard and the Fahey boys, throwing the snowballs at vehicles landed them in an adventure when the guy in the black Buick actually stopped and pursued them on a foot chase that was extremely engaging to the reader. The summary at the end asks if Dillard learned anything or the purpose of the essay, and I feel that she learned childhood mischievous fun is both. We can see this in the sentence after they were caught and yelled at: “…I would have died happy, for nothing has required so much of me since being chased all over Pittsburgh in the middle of winter...” (78). I also felt after reading the story that the conclusion appropriately wrapped up the narrative by simply stating: “I don’t know how he found his way back to his car”
This was fine sport” (Aaron and Kuhl 74). My initial reaction was that it was “just okay” but as I continued to read, the narrative drew me in further as Dillard continued to describe her background story of how she was something of a tomboy and set the stage for what was about to occur in a child’s point of view. What I had considered a tolerable introduction, quickly escalated to the part where Dillard spoke of making an ice ball that carries the story back to the start where she describes how she had a “boy’s arm” when it came to throwing a baseball. The actions taken by Dillard and the Fahey boys, throwing the snowballs at vehicles landed them in an adventure when the guy in the black Buick actually stopped and pursued them on a foot chase that was extremely engaging to the reader. The summary at the end asks if Dillard learned anything or the purpose of the essay, and I feel that she learned childhood mischievous fun is both. We can see this in the sentence after they were caught and yelled at: “…I would have died happy, for nothing has required so much of me since being chased all over Pittsburgh in the middle of winter...” (78). I also felt after reading the story that the conclusion appropriately wrapped up the narrative by simply stating: “I don’t know how he found his way back to his car”