Comparison and Contrast Persuasive Essay
Tina Yuan
ENG3U1-06
Ms. Lawton
November 30, 2009
Comparison and Contrast Persuasive Essay
Being a girl who’s born and raised in a Chinese family, I always heard people making comments about how girls are useless. Maybe is because I am a teenager, now the more I hear about it , the more I am rebellious to it. In my opinion, girls will always be superior than boys. From the inside to the outside, girls have better appearance, better personality, and even better social status.
First of all, girls care more about their appearance than boys. They have more choices on clothes; if you compare a girls’ closet to a boys’, you would only find t-shirts and jeans in boys’ closet, but for a girl, they can have all kinds of choices; It’s okay if a girl is wearing jeans, but it’s awkward to see a boy wearing skirt; It’s sexy for a girl to wear short shorts, but it’s nerdy for a boy to wear short shorts. If a girl is born to be short, people will say that she is cute and petite, but if a boy is short and small, people would only say that he is weak. If a girl was born with an imperfect face, she can make-up to it by using cosmetic products, but if a boy was born with an imperfect face, he will only be considered as ugly. Yes, there are boys out there who puts on make up, but take a look around you, I bet you will never find a boy standing in front of the cosmetic section in shoppers and wondering which eyeliner to pick.
Compare to boys, girls has better personalities. They are more caring and they live with less pressure. A girl can cry when ever and where ever they want. But boys will always need to learn to control their emotions. Girls can do more things freely than boys; girls can talk behind other’s back without any hesitation; I bet you’ve never seem a group of boys sits down together gossip about other boys in their class. Girls are smarter than boys, they can always multi-task, but a boy is easily distracted; girls can work and have a cup of tea at the same time
ENG3U1-06
Ms. Lawton
November 30, 2009
Comparison and Contrast Persuasive Essay
Being a girl who’s born and raised in a Chinese family, I always heard people making comments about how girls are useless. Maybe is because I am a teenager, now the more I hear about it , the more I am rebellious to it. In my opinion, girls will always be superior than boys. From the inside to the outside, girls have better appearance, better personality, and even better social status.
First of all, girls care more about their appearance than boys. They have more choices on clothes; if you compare a girls’ closet to a boys’, you would only find t-shirts and jeans in boys’ closet, but for a girl, they can have all kinds of choices; It’s okay if a girl is wearing jeans, but it’s awkward to see a boy wearing skirt; It’s sexy for a girl to wear short shorts, but it’s nerdy for a boy to wear short shorts. If a girl is born to be short, people will say that she is cute and petite, but if a boy is short and small, people would only say that he is weak. If a girl was born with an imperfect face, she can make-up to it by using cosmetic products, but if a boy was born with an imperfect face, he will only be considered as ugly. Yes, there are boys out there who puts on make up, but take a look around you, I bet you will never find a boy standing in front of the cosmetic section in shoppers and wondering which eyeliner to pick.
Compare to boys, girls has better personalities. They are more caring and they live with less pressure. A girl can cry when ever and where ever they want. But boys will always need to learn to control their emotions. Girls can do more things freely than boys; girls can talk behind other’s back without any hesitation; I bet you’ve never seem a group of boys sits down together gossip about other boys in their class. Girls are smarter than boys, they can always multi-task, but a boy is easily distracted; girls can work and have a cup of tea at the same time