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One Crisp fall morning a girl named Crimson who wore a dark red hood was asked by her mother to deliver some baked goods to her grandmothers house, who was sick at the time. The mother who was hesitant to even ask her because, of the dangers lurking in the woods made Crimson promise that she wouldn't talk to any strangers and would head straight there. Crimson Agreed to this and started skipping towards the woods. On her way she came across a few small animals. A squirrel, a fox and a mouse. She noticed them and skipped on by wondering what her mother was so worried about. She continues to skip worry further into the woods when she hears a noise in the distance. She thinks it’s just another innocent animal so she continues on her journey …show more content…
Her grandmother responded and said to come in. Crimson opened the door and noticed her grandmother in her bed looking suspiciously different. She said grandma your eyes, ears and mouth are all so big. Her grandma said that she is only being paranoid because, of the werewolf you seen in the woods. Crimson heard a scream in the other room and then realized that she had not yet told her grandmother about the werewolf she seen in the woods. She put two and two together and realized that her grandmother before her was not her grandmother, but the werewolf she had encountered in the woods. The Werewolf looked at Crimson and seen the look on her face and quickly jumped on her and held her down with his super sharp claws getting ready to attack. Just then a couple of men from the forest ran through the doors and started to attack the werewolf to get him off of Crimson. It took a couple of minutes, but they were able to save Crimson. Crimson was finally able to get to her grandmother safely and asked the men how they knew to come they stated that they had seen the werewolf lurking through the woods a while back and heard the scream come from her grandmothers so they came running and seen the werewolf

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