Discursive Essay
Discursive Essay
Structure:
I. Introduction nowadays in ancient times in analysing it we can draw out positive and negative
+ thesis (economic, politic, social)
II. Body Paragraphs economically, politically, environmentally speaking/connection/on (ecology) in addition, similarly, moreover, therefore however, conversely
III. Conclusion in finalizing, we can see considering; taking into consideration
Extraordinary Essay should:
1) Content and Structure
Be consistently well developed, logical stages in an overall, at times complex, argument.
Each stage is linked to the preceding one, and sentences within paragraphs are soundly sequenced.
2) Style and Accuracy
Appropriately used ambitious language
Complex sentence structures where appropriate
Examples:
1) TOURISM SPOILS BEAUTIFUL COUNTRIES Nowadays, tourism is one of the largest and dynamic economic sectors. In analysing it, we can draw out positive and negative perspectives. Economic, environmental and cultural effects flood various countries all around the wide world, due to tourism. There are many hidden costs and benefits to tourism which can have unfavourable and favourable economic effects on communities. Most highly developed countries, such as Austria, have accumulated a big deal of their economic welfare profits from tourism. For instance, Austria, being Europe’s ski resort, is depending on the money gained from their huge number of slopes used by worldwide tourists. Economically speaking, tourism creates poor paid, seasonal jobs that might not always be the source of money one’s having. Also, the money generated by tourism doesn’t always benefit the locals, as it leaks to huge hotel chains and agencies. This is why destinations dependent on tourism can be adversely affected by a local economic collapse. On local ecology, tourism often grows into mass tourism and this leads to either pollution or preservation. In many countries of Asia and the Pacific, tourism is the main
Structure:
I. Introduction nowadays in ancient times in analysing it we can draw out positive and negative
+ thesis (economic, politic, social)
II. Body Paragraphs economically, politically, environmentally speaking/connection/on (ecology) in addition, similarly, moreover, therefore however, conversely
III. Conclusion in finalizing, we can see considering; taking into consideration
Extraordinary Essay should:
1) Content and Structure
Be consistently well developed, logical stages in an overall, at times complex, argument.
Each stage is linked to the preceding one, and sentences within paragraphs are soundly sequenced.
2) Style and Accuracy
Appropriately used ambitious language
Complex sentence structures where appropriate
Examples:
1) TOURISM SPOILS BEAUTIFUL COUNTRIES Nowadays, tourism is one of the largest and dynamic economic sectors. In analysing it, we can draw out positive and negative perspectives. Economic, environmental and cultural effects flood various countries all around the wide world, due to tourism. There are many hidden costs and benefits to tourism which can have unfavourable and favourable economic effects on communities. Most highly developed countries, such as Austria, have accumulated a big deal of their economic welfare profits from tourism. For instance, Austria, being Europe’s ski resort, is depending on the money gained from their huge number of slopes used by worldwide tourists. Economically speaking, tourism creates poor paid, seasonal jobs that might not always be the source of money one’s having. Also, the money generated by tourism doesn’t always benefit the locals, as it leaks to huge hotel chains and agencies. This is why destinations dependent on tourism can be adversely affected by a local economic collapse. On local ecology, tourism often grows into mass tourism and this leads to either pollution or preservation. In many countries of Asia and the Pacific, tourism is the main