“Elroy Berdahl remained quiet. He kept fishing. He worked his line with the tips of his fingers, patiently, squinting out at his red and white bobber on the Rainy River. His eyes were flat and impassive. He didn't speak. He was simply there, like the river and the late-summer sun. And yet by his presence, his mute watchfulness, he made it real. He was the true audience. He was a witness, like God, or like the gods, who look on in …show more content…
The use of anaphora demonstrates the significance of Elroy’s actions as he enables O’Brien to reflect on his options without judgment. Elroy's profound understanding of O'Brien's situation and selfless friendship provided him with the composure to make a life-altering decision.
Hosseini demonstrates that Hassan’s love for Amir compels him to make honorable decisions in the future through his use of syntax. In Kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini, Hassan and Amir are inseparable friends growing up in Kabul despite coming from different ethnic backgrounds. Hassan is incredibly loving, devoted, and protective of Amir, even though Amir does not always appear that he reciprocates these feelings. One day, this becomes a reality when Amir witnesses Hassan being bullied and raped and does not attempt to defend his best friend in any way. This leaves Amir tormented by guilt for many years to come, even as he moves into adulthood in the United States to escape the dangers of Afghanistan. Upon traveling to Pakistan to visit his dying childhood friend, Rahim Khan, he learns that Hassan was actually his half-brother and that he has died. This causes him to place