11 October 2014
1. What is the cause or effect you are analyzing in your thesis?
My cause and effect for my essay is the effects of smoking.
2. How have you explained the cause-and-effect relationship?
I have explained the effects of smoking on saying why people start and how to quit.
3. Have I organized my causes and/or effects logically?
I have organized it well and believe that it flows smoothly.
4. Have I concluded my essay effectively?
I have concluded my essay well by finishing strong and restating the thesis.
Identify one change you have made as a result of proofreading your essay?
I changed the body and talked mostly why people start smoking instead of listing the facts of smoking.
English 101
11 October 2014
Effects of Smoking Today smoking is one of the hardest habits to break; yet to this day millions of people still smoke. If you look on all tobacco products it says right on there “caution may cause cancer or tooth loss”. So why do they start smoking in the first place? Is it because they are addicted to it or is it because people don’t know what they’re doing to their body? Even though people may find smoking relaxing, it is life threatening not only to themselves but others around them. So if smoking is so bad …show more content…
But one of the 4,000 chemicals in cigarettes called nicotine makes it so hard to quit. Nicotine is a drug that makes you become addicted to cigarettes and makes you want more. Smoking is an addiction that is started at an early age. Two-thirds of smokers become addicted under the age of 18 (Evening Times). Smoking is very dangerous for females during pregnancy because it greatly increases the percentage of affecting the baby. One good thing in today’s world is that there is plenty of help out there. People need to reach out whether it’s going to therapy or just surrounding themselves around people who can influence them to quit and help save that persons