Essay Graphic Organizer
Co: 10 Ehern Wang 5.01.2015
Essay Graphic Organizer
Introduction:
Catchy intro sentence-
“You think that so called ‘whole wheat’ bread is healthy, well here an unfortunate truth- some health foods are actually junk food in disguise.”
Background sentences-
“This had been said because many food manufacturers had claimed to have healthy food only to get more consumers, to raise sales.”
Thesis-
“Those health foods are actually junk food.”
3 Main arguments-
1st-Sugar Water=Juice and Sport Drinks
2nd-Agave and Margarine, worst replacement ever
3rd –Health and gluten Free labels
BP1:
Juice and Sport drinks are full of sugar
A lot of fruit juice in the supermarket isn’t really juice, sometimes there isn’t even any actual fruit in there, just sugar and chemicals that tastes like fruit.
100% juice isn’t really that good either because without any fiber, it’s just the sugar that’s left.
Sports drinks were designed for athletes, not normal people, we don’t need that much sugar and salt that is contained in the sport drink.
BP2
Replacement foods of some so claimed “unhealthy foods are sometimes worse.
Agave nectar (agave syrup) is an alternative for sugar when people bega to know the harmful effects of it. But agave is much worse.
One of the main problems with sugar is that it has excessive amounts of fructose. which can cause severe metabolic problems when consumed in. Whereas sugar is about 50% fructose and High Fructose Corn Syrup about 55%, Agave contains even more up to 70-90%
Margarine is an replacement for butter due to the high saturated fat content, but what they didn’t know was that margarine had a higher trans-fat compared to butter, and it was not food at all, just an assembly of chemicals and refined oils to be made and look like food.
BP3
Do not trust the gluten free and healthy label on the product boxes.
According to a 2013 survey, about a third of people in the U.S. are
Essay Graphic Organizer
Introduction:
Catchy intro sentence-
“You think that so called ‘whole wheat’ bread is healthy, well here an unfortunate truth- some health foods are actually junk food in disguise.”
Background sentences-
“This had been said because many food manufacturers had claimed to have healthy food only to get more consumers, to raise sales.”
Thesis-
“Those health foods are actually junk food.”
3 Main arguments-
1st-Sugar Water=Juice and Sport Drinks
2nd-Agave and Margarine, worst replacement ever
3rd –Health and gluten Free labels
BP1:
Juice and Sport drinks are full of sugar
A lot of fruit juice in the supermarket isn’t really juice, sometimes there isn’t even any actual fruit in there, just sugar and chemicals that tastes like fruit.
100% juice isn’t really that good either because without any fiber, it’s just the sugar that’s left.
Sports drinks were designed for athletes, not normal people, we don’t need that much sugar and salt that is contained in the sport drink.
BP2
Replacement foods of some so claimed “unhealthy foods are sometimes worse.
Agave nectar (agave syrup) is an alternative for sugar when people bega to know the harmful effects of it. But agave is much worse.
One of the main problems with sugar is that it has excessive amounts of fructose. which can cause severe metabolic problems when consumed in. Whereas sugar is about 50% fructose and High Fructose Corn Syrup about 55%, Agave contains even more up to 70-90%
Margarine is an replacement for butter due to the high saturated fat content, but what they didn’t know was that margarine had a higher trans-fat compared to butter, and it was not food at all, just an assembly of chemicals and refined oils to be made and look like food.
BP3
Do not trust the gluten free and healthy label on the product boxes.
According to a 2013 survey, about a third of people in the U.S. are