Piercy uses descriptive language to portray a picture of the story and the girl included in it. The line “wee lipsticks the color of cherry candy” (line 4) helps paint a picture in the reader’s mind as they begin to form the scenes of the story. Describing the size and color of the lipstick gives the lipstick a life-like form in the mind. Another line that portrays a scene is the line “Everyone saw a fat nose on thick legs” (line 11) which ultimately sets the tone for the rest of the poem. The description of the girl’s “flaws” helped show the reader what the girl believed to be wrong with herself. “In the casket displayed on satin she lay/ With the undertaker's cosmetics painted on”(lines 19 and 20) are two of the most striking lines of the end of the poem. These lines vividly create the scene that the girl’s friends and family must have seen after her death. While the word choice seems simple, it portrays a large turn in the story that the reader can understand and
Piercy uses descriptive language to portray a picture of the story and the girl included in it. The line “wee lipsticks the color of cherry candy” (line 4) helps paint a picture in the reader’s mind as they begin to form the scenes of the story. Describing the size and color of the lipstick gives the lipstick a life-like form in the mind. Another line that portrays a scene is the line “Everyone saw a fat nose on thick legs” (line 11) which ultimately sets the tone for the rest of the poem. The description of the girl’s “flaws” helped show the reader what the girl believed to be wrong with herself. “In the casket displayed on satin she lay/ With the undertaker's cosmetics painted on”(lines 19 and 20) are two of the most striking lines of the end of the poem. These lines vividly create the scene that the girl’s friends and family must have seen after her death. While the word choice seems simple, it portrays a large turn in the story that the reader can understand and