Amy Goldwasser seems to have two intentions in her piece: One, to persuade the older generation to believe in the endless potential of the Internet—to make them believe the Internet is not “the villain,” “… stop presenting it as the enemy of history and literature and worldly knowledge, then our teenagers have the potential to become…
The essay, although informed is an opinion piece. It has been written expressly for the reason to take the knowledge available and apply it to Carr’s ideas, to reinforce his points as he tries to persuade the reader to re-think their understanding of the internet and its uses. There are many sources available to use for this topic and Carr takes advantage of this, however there is not much in the way of hard evidence, most of the evidence he uses is anecdotal that he can align with his own. Carr actually uses predominantly online resources; he often quotes online bloggers and friends that he describes as “literary types”. He uses this form of evidence to prove points on how the way peoples attitudes are changing, such as this quote by Scott Karp, a blogger, “I was a lit major in college, and used to be a voracious book reader” after Karp confessed to have stopped reading books, Carr has tactfully used this quote to justify the point and can follow it up and build on it.…
In “What’s the Matter with Kids Today” by Amy Goldwasser, she talks about teens’ use of technology and the affect on them. Her main point is that the Internet has expanded kids’ minds when it comes to school and themselves. Kids tend to know more than the previous generations because they have easier access to information by using the Internet. In her article she states that several reports show that teens do not read or write as much as they used to, and that they are only interested in their IPods and computers. Amy disagrees with these findings saying that the Internet is a great way to communicate, and has created a generation full of influential people, such as writers, activists, ect. The Internet gives teens a means to write and share…
“What Adolescents Miss When we let them grow Up in Cyberspace” written by Brent Staples is a great essay and has many strong points. But I’m going to disagree with this one. The fact that staples has argued that the internet is taking over teenagers social life has offended me and my generation. I differ with his arguments. I believe that the internet has made today’s teenagers more socialize and more connected than ever. Facebook, msn, gmail, twitter etc is a great tool for teenagers to stay in touch and makes it easier for each of them to communicate. The internet is a great tool for teenagers to meet and make new friends around the world. I believe that the internet has made teenagers more attentive than before. Let’s use twitter as an example. Twitter is a social site where you and other…
Communication among the internet has become increasingly popular, especially among adolescents. About ninety-three percent of young people in America between the ages of twelve and seventeen are using the internet. Most adolescents are using the internet to communicate among social networking websites such as facebook and twitter. They are usually continuing communication among already formed friendships. These friendships could include people they see daily, friends from summer camp, town sports, or long distance friends from a vacation spot. Yet there are still fifty-five percent of adolescents who do in fact communicate with people who they do not know.…
The author uses some personal experiences to detail the negative effects of the Internet. Carr begins his article by describing how he became worried about the Web. He mentions that his reading skill changes throughout the years. He says, “Over the past few years I’ve had an uncomfortable sense that someone or something has been tinkering with my brain” (313). Carr realizes that spending too much time on the internet causes his reading concentration to degrade over time. Using his own experiences, it can appeal more to the readers. But in order to avoid showing a bias opinion, the author also mentions more people that have the same reading struggle. One of the people that he mentions in the article is a blogger named Bruce Friedman. Friedman told the author, “I now have almost totally lost the ability to read and absorb a longish article on the web or in print” (316). By mentioning all those people, the author creates an alerting tone, perhaps to make the readers…
This can easily occur in the real world as well. But the only way to know what is real and what is not online, is through interacting online and gaining experience. This experience can be gained when a person communicates on the internet. If this means a child is not getting interaction, it is the parents responisiblity to limit the computer time if it is overly excessive.. If a child is on the computer days on end , it is just as bad as watching TV all day. They can easily limit the type forcing the child to find another activity. Just as well, Brent says that it is only adolscents that mask themselves behind the computer, when in fact equally as many adults do this as well. Adults go to the internet for the same reasons teens do, and Brent should realize they encounter the same effects if they are on the computer…
Nicholas Carr's whole argument about how the internet is hurting us and making the use of our own knowledge become less of a factor is hard to believe looking at the resources it provides to us today. Google, Wikipedia, online databases, and school libraries are all being put on the internet to serve accessible information. Colleges are even using the internet for online courses and e-mail services to communicate with students. The internet is has also brought us the ability to research and communicate across various cultures without actually having to travel to those locations to see them first hand. Social media websites, such as Facebook and Twitter, are a very good examples of a communication tool if they are used in the correct fashion. Websites like these allow for people to read about a topic or issue and discuss it with people all over the world, even the people that are being affected. Blogs, discussion boards, and pictures are shared on the web with the rest of the world to see and act upon. Carr fails to mention the use of the web in this way in his article. What Carr doesn't realize is that the internet is an endless pit of information and is available to everyone, just not always necessarily accessed by users. We are attracted to what we are interested in and what is the most useful to us on the internet. Carr mentions that "power browsing" is making us avoid the traditional way…
Some debate that Facebook, and other social networking sites are undermining our ability to communicate and the use of such sites dehumanise what is an important part of community life and living together. However, if anything, I believe these social networking websites allow us the opportunity to meet and form friendships with people that we may not otherwise communicate with and to create these friendships faster. They allow us to keep in contact with friends and family, whether they are in our own city or on the other side of the world, with greater ease. In today’s fast paced environment nobody has time to sit down daily and respond to individual emails; Facebook and MySpace allow us to reach all of our friends and colleagues with a simple click of a button. For the introverts among us, social networking eliminates the pressure of face to face contact and can help those shy people with the initial contact of meeting others. Facebook’s photo sharing application is rated the most used on the Internet, drawing more than twice as much traffic as the next three sites combined. These statistics show a great emphasis on the online community, especially when 14 million photos are being uploaded every day. With active users doubling every six months and more than half of active users returning daily it is clear to see people all over the world are embracing the convenience of social networking.…
All my life I have been addicted to computers, and most of the time my urge to be on the laptop has kept me inside and prevented me from playing football and other sports with my friends. The Internet is a big reason why people communicate less with one another. It works kind of like a drug because of the way it controls the human mind. The Internet hinders human interactions because of the way it consumes people’s time, alters their behavior and influences their educational research.…
Social networking is all the rage with society. It is a main outlet for both personal and professional networking. Whether its job related and trying to put the word out for prospective employers or just connecting with a long distance friend via instant message, there aren’t too many people who have not taken advantage of this option to connect with others. There are not many households without the technology to take advantage of this option in communication. It seems to be the main form of contact within society today. The problem with this method of communication is that it does not allow for strong face to face interaction and allows society to in a sense to hide themselves. This inherently has led to a society with lower self esteem and has put a wall up with its users lowering standards of social interaction. It has had such a negative impact and should be used with greater caution especially within the teenage and young adult generation. Such sites as Facebook, Myspace and orkut have had an extremely negative impact on society and what should be perceived as acceptable. Social Networks and the ideas and activities associated with these networks have become profoundly detrimental to society today. It has escalated into much more impressive problems such as cyber bullying, intense obsession and lessened interpersonal communication skills.…
The development and speed of the internet has had great impact on the teenagers of today. (Broughton, 2009). As the web has developed throughout the 1990’s – 2000’s it has created advantages in terms of education and social networking. As stated by Andrew Large, “The rapid exposures of the web to teenagers have allowed them to enrich their educational, leisure and social activities”…
The methods by which people communicate have changed and evolved with time so that some of the values in face-to-face communication have been lost. Body language is now found through the tone of text, and face-to-face conversations have transformed into typing messages and sending photos. Of the top ten most popular websites, as tracked by Alexa (a web information company), half are social networking sites (Golbeck). The popularity of using social networking sites continues to expand with time, and as technology grows, easier access to such sites is increasing, ultimately diminishing face-to-face communication. There is no denying that social media allow people to remain connected, near or far from one another, but there is controversy regarding the effects they have on people and on their relationships with others. Therefore, the impact of a person’s ability to access social networking sites is negatively affecting that person’s relationships with other people in their lives, whether it is family members, friends, intimate relationships, or the relationship within self.…
Has the introduction of social networking through "Facebook" and "Twitter", as well as Apple "I" gadgets, destroyed our ability to communicate face-to-face? A survey conducted by Social Media Examiner highlighted the fact that 50% of teenagers communicate more regularly with each other via social networking or texting instead of the old fashioned face-to- face method. This is a cause for great concern.…
Discussed oftentimes, the effects of communication technology on our social lives are developing to be graver than at any other time in recent memory in the recent past. These are not simply cellular telephones, the open medium through sms, mms or sound/feature calls and visits, that have gotten to be perpetual yet stylish hand-adornment; actually, messages and interpersonal organizations, the most regularly and too much utilized online medium of correspondence, have been profoundly established in our lives nowadays. The majority of the analysts inferred that: "pretty much 60% of all web clients additionally impart through informal communities and more than 85 % of all youngsters have accounts on interpersonal organizations".…