Introduction:
Hook: The young generation is restless, but not quite; it’s alive with sounds.
Bridge: In a world of light-speed data transmission,there are 98% people from all walks of life are using derivatives of technology, providing that the technology revolution is upon us and changing the young generation. The young generation uses Facebook, Twitter and other social media to stay politically active and protect their rights online. Also, under the protection of social media, renegates become more brave to express their political idea.
Thesis Statement: I totally disagree the statement of Generation Q and Generation of generation Q is right, saying the young generation is quiet, because of innovation of Internet brings more connections and excitements to us, the social driven by the money pushs renegates eliminate scilence and setback leads renegates to need emotional and psychological needs by speaking out.
Body paragraphs:
First Supporting Idea: Innovation of Internet provides many ways to widely and quickly spread information .
Information transmission is fast.
Information transmissiom range is wide.
Obejection point: Spending too much time on Facebook wastes time.
Reply: Altough a large number of people says that teenegers spend too much time on Facebook, young people make many friend and even know the informaiton of party on Facebook.
Second Supporting Idea: The social driven by the money pushs teenegers eliminate scilence.
Protect their rights.
More and more social engagements
Objection Point: Society requires people to keep order.
Reply: The social driven by the money forces people to conceal the fact, but young generation is brave to protect their rights by protesting.
Third Supporting Idea: Setback leads teenegers to need to emotional and psychological needs by speaking out.
Release pressure
Obejection Point: