Preview

How Did Our Family Become So Broken In London?

Good Essays
Open Document
Open Document
1273 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
How Did Our Family Become So Broken In London?
January, 1811 Dearest Journal,
Crimson blood splattered onto the legs of the merciless power loom that Tuesday morning during the winter of 1811 in London. My small mouth had been gaped open wide, eyes painting the horrific scene into my head. The boy...he was gone. Just like that, at the same age as I, the young male had been smashed by the very thing barely keeping us alive.
“Back to work!” a smack of a belt had made the children around me scatter to their assigned power loom.
Green eyes wide, I’d moved away from the bloody loom, my boots sloshing in the small pool of blood gathering underneath me. Even after walking away, I could still hear the crunching and squeezing of the lifeless boy, his body making the same sounds as a juicy squished bug. I’d noticed a few
…show more content…
Her hands had been shaking as she hugged both Walter and I. Even Father had had tearing eyes, his firm shell cracking to his children leaving possibly for forever. How had our family become so broken within days?
When we arrived to London, I hadn’t thought I’d seen such a dark place in my life. Dark black smoke billed out from buildings and garbage covered the streets. The wells full of water even looked unsanitary, clogged with the pollution of the smoking buildings and garbage.
“Those are the factories,” Walter had pointed to all the buildings billowing with smoke. “Father once said that every day more than one child loses something, like a finger or leg, or even their life. Don’t be the reckless self you are, Em, or you’ll get yourself killed.”
I rest now on the itchy hay thinking of my past and the city. Walter, luckily, shifts next to me in his sleep. Why do I say luckily? Most people sleep in small spaces on hay with unknown people in London. I’ve been lucky enough to share a haybed with Walter instead of a stranger. Six others snore and shift in their sleep around us. I can smell their foul breath in the small

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    When Sal’s mother left, Sal didn’t know what to feel right away. She had always relied on her mother to feel sad or happy. Then Sal closed up. She wouldn’t let anyone that wasn’t a friend or family around her. Sal barely even talked to her dad because she was feeling a mix of emotions .…

    • 224 Words
    • 1 Page
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    Ana Deal: A Short Story

    • 2115 Words
    • 9 Pages

    She had said goodbye to someone else’s lover for them, she had arrived to be too late, twice. She had torn lives apart millions of times, and only now, was hers torn apart itself.…

    • 2115 Words
    • 9 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    With love, The pungent smell of blood, sweat and tears filled the clean, crisp air. There lay a black boy, flat upon his chest, on the deck of a smooth sailing ship. His feet, hands and neck were bound with metal chains fastened to the railings of the ship. By his side stood a huge Oburoni armed with a long whip which he applied with merciless power and precision. Each stroke left a deep gash in the smooth, dark skin of the young boy, preceding the blood that followed.…

    • 1620 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Through the eyes of various characters, Wolff is able to display the extent to which being in a broken family constitutes failure in throughout the memoir. The idea of having a nuclear family is a prominent theme through the text. To readers surprise Wolff foreshadows this effect of being a part of a broken family through Jack’s infatuation with Annette. This point is taken further by Jack who ‘imagine[s] a terrible accident in front of her house’. This showcases Jacks yearning for love and affection which he doesn’t receive from his mother who is too busy trying to support them both. The impacts of a broken family are further displayed through Terry Taylor and Terry Silver. The failure of Mrs. Taylor and Mrs. Silver to not raise their sons properly is seen through they hooligan like acts such as shoplifting and vandalism. However, being part of a split family can constitute a fail in the memoir, there are those who fail to determine who they are.…

    • 873 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    I stared back at my mother in awe, her face crinkled with pain, flooded with tears and flushed as she watched her son drift into the distance. How I wish I’d never gone to that dreadful war, it was the worst thing I’d ever experienced. As tears began filling my eyes, another strong breeze whipped us into another timeline, a new place too.…

    • 1230 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    Jane Eyre Journal Entries

    • 1313 Words
    • 6 Pages

    Response: This shows the effects of the mistreatment from Aunt Reed and her family. Also, the love she never got from them and always needed.…

    • 1313 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Cut his throat ! Spill his blood ! Do him in” (152)! The sticks fell and the mouth of the new circle crunched and screamed. The beast was on his knees at the center, arms folded over its face. Fear had filled the boys’ head and ultimately ended the life of another boy. Meaning that their fear had made the boys insane.…

    • 809 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Forbidden City Quote Chart

    • 1264 Words
    • 6 Pages

    “My stomach was knotted with fear and I kept wondering if I was making a foolish mistake” (151)…

    • 1264 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    "Then the mask said, 'I wasn't fair to your father. I shouldn't have married him...Such a ridiculous-waste of years...For us all'" (Carr 142). After constantly avoiding her real feelings, Geneva finally admits the truth of who she loved. She finally lifted a burden that had been haunting and weighing her down for years. Although she had a completely different experience, Saranell endured the exact same feeling. "She gazed up at it, and the aloneness of the dark hills merging with the dark sky began to crush her. Tears ran from the corners of her eyes. The stars swam and dissolved. And in a moment she was sobbing. For her mother. For herself. For the awkward balm-of-Gilead trees...and for the smell of books in her father's library" (Carr 155). All of the experiences and the pain of what she has gone through finally caught up with Saranell. She finally embraced what had happened in her life and accepted what was real. It doesn't matter how long takes, the truth of reality will always shine through.…

    • 535 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    uses words such as heart-broken, sorrowful, dying eyes, silent nursery, empty cradle and hapless describing the feelings the mothers were going through during that time. The writer has given only a faint shadow, a dim picture, of the anguish and despair that are, at this very moment, riving thousands of hearts, shattering thousands of families, and driving a helpless and sensitive race to frenzy and despair (Stowe 7).…

    • 630 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Lily Monologue

    • 1202 Words
    • 5 Pages

    She could feel her mother there, as always, reminding her to give her father a chance. But without her mother there on earth by her side, nothing would ever be the same. The world just became so bland. Lily began to cry, sorrow filling her…

    • 1202 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Sophie Alternate Ending

    • 705 Words
    • 3 Pages

    “Where is Sophie? Why isn’t she coming or helping me?” I thought. I tried to stay on my back and put my palms into the ground so I didn’t turn over. My face was being dragged in the dirt and rocks and I began to cry as we turned around…

    • 705 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    Swooning, I staggered to the opposite wall. For one instant the party on the stairs remained motionless, through extremity of terror and awe… Upon its head, with red extended mouth and solitary eye of fire, sat the hideous beast whose craft had seduced me into murder, and whose informing voice had consigned me to the hangman. I had walled the monster up within the tomb.…

    • 2519 Words
    • 11 Pages
    Powerful Essays
  • Good Essays

    She described her parents death as expected, “I had been expecting (fearing, dreading, anticipating) those deaths all my life. They remained, when they did occur, distanced, at a remove from the ongoing dailiness of my life” (Didion, pg. 27, 2005). The sudden loss of John, was an entirely different experience, one that placed her in a “high-risk group” for complicated grief (Potocky, 1993). Didion noted the “ordinary nature of everything preceding” some disasters.…

    • 1318 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Powerful Essays

    An Emergency

    • 970 Words
    • 4 Pages

    “Bye my butter blossom” she said as she pulled the plug. As the doctors rushed in, I fell to my knee crying in sorrow, I knew I wouldn’t see her tomorrow. As both of my parents dead I didn’t know what to do.…

    • 970 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Powerful Essays