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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint.

3-Day [Write out numbers under 10] Diet Analysis Janice Springfield SCI/241 September 16, 2012 Tiffany Glenn 3-Day [Write out numbers under 10] Diet Analysis c | | | | | | | | | | Jan1's Food Groups and Calories Report 09/09/12 - 09/14/12 | Your personal Calorie goal is 2000. Your plan amounts are based on meeting your nutrient needs. | | | | Food Groups | Target | Average Eaten | Status | | Grains | 6 ounce(s) | 3½ ounce(s) | Under | | Whole Grains | ≥ 3 ounce(s) | 1½ ounce(s) | Under | | Refined Grains | ≤ 3 ounce(s) | 2 ounce(s) | OK [Avoid using forms of "okay" in academic writing.] | | Vegetables | 2½ cup(s) | 1¼ cup(s) |

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