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If I Made Michael Change
This book was very good but I think that if I was added in, in two different parts to change something it would end up better. I would change the beginning when michael was being bullied when his powers went off. If I was added in I would stop that from happening I would run out and right before it happens tell them to stop so that they don't question him. If I did change that I would make sure to change somewhere in the story so that taylor knows that Michael likes him and knows his powers. During when he was getting bullied she saw the powers that's why I would stop that then somewhere in the book let Michael tell her or something because she helps him out alot through is. So that's what I would change if I had the chance to.

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