Likewise, Timothy Severin also exaggerates the fierceness of the Golbi dessert, "the scientists watched as a lake writhed and changed shape, and finally vanished into thin air as its water evaporated and its feeder streams choked to death in the sand." Jhon Muir makes the Great canyons of Yosemite feel even more …show more content…
"Out of a clear calm sky a summer storm begins to gather. The camels of the caravan start to fidget and grumble; dogs howl; and the men hurry frantically to tighten saddle-straps or to double-peg their tent ropes." This qoute makes the whole enviroment feel intertwined in how everything lives life in the Golbi Desert.
Both authors make the reader feel the scenery move as they read on. They do this with the help of all sorts of personifaction, hyperbole, and many other figures of speech. For example, Jhon Muir may use personifaction to give the Yosemite more relatability, by giving it human characteristics. Timothy Severin will also use personifaction, however he also blends it in with hyperbole, to really draw out just how fierce Golbi Desert can be. All in all, The Incomparable Yosemite, and The Oriental Adventure are amazing examples of how to draw out the life of an