Maya Angelou describes how she sees Bailey as more elegant and graceful than herself. "When I was described by our playmates as being shit color, he was lauded for his velvet-black skin...And yet he loved me." (Maya Angelou, 17). When elders made remarks about her features, they didn't try to hide the fact that they thought she was ugly. Although she didn't see herself as comely, Bailey always seemed to make her feel better. Another person who wasn't partial to Maya because of her looks was Mrs. Flowers. She treated Margerite as if she were an old friend rather than putting her down.
Maya Angelou gives good visuals by showing and not telling. For instance, the way she describes Mr. Freeman as being flabby and sluggish. Although she describes him in a negative way, the description is still interesting. Even more vile than his personality were his actions. At first she didn't mind because she felt loved, "I didn't want to admit that I had in fact liked this, his holding me" (65, Angelou). However, after she realized how wrong it was she broke her silence, to Bailey. By presenting him as a pedophile, she makes the reader want to hate him as much as she does.
Maya Angelou describes her thoughts after her rape so perfectly, it seems as if it had only just happened. She makes the reader feel exactly what she was feeling, because she talks about her emotions with such great intricacy. The feelings and naïve thoughts of an eight-year-old are hard to remember and