Monologue Of Catherine Chapter Analysis

Setting/Description/Dialogue

I don't think you should describe the Catherine as a widow in the prologue. Despite exchanging vows, they still weren't married. It doesn't really fit her case. It was a good prologue. Although, it was a bit contradictory when you said that the hiding woman was there for the widow, yet it was also said all she cared about was fate. Why is she even there? Hopefully, we get to see this underlying meaning. There are instances when the redundancy is obvious. One example is refrain (I'm not saying they shouldn't be used, it's okay to use them but not too much) from using extremely, really and others like them. For example, instead of using extremely large, use enormous. Another is to show them rather
He was said to be the evil twin, but of course the people who called him that are yet to be proven wrong, given that there's a possibility that he's a possible love interest of the heroine (I'm open to all possibilities). Anyway, he was a bit mysterious, his entrance was intriguing as to why there was hatred in his eyes. Despite of his jerk-y attitude in chapters one and two, he was actually likable. He sure has got a high confidence level, considering his conversation with Catherine at the coffee shop. Anyway, it was said in chapter one he tried to seduce her to spite his brother, and now, in chapter two, he was being concerned for her explaining it with saying "people can change" which is a bit weak. It was a good back up when he said there are many things Catherine didn't know. It was intriguing. I think if Sylvester were to get closer to Sylvester, it would be interesting to see him fret or maintain his composure. Also, it felt like a bit out of character when he easily gave up convincing Catherine in chapter three. Perhaps it's because he was portrayed as someone stubborn or something like that because of his conversation with Catherine after she woke up in chapter two. But then again, there must have been an explanation to that. As the story progressed, it seemed like he lost that cool guy approach (see chapters one and two conversation with Catherine) or something like that, and became the nice guy who looks out for Catherine. It was sweet
At first he seemed like an unimportant character (a flirtatious waiter), later on, he introduced his name (knowing a character's name isn't my basis for considering him or her a minor character). His motives were yet to be revealed, given that he'll be shown in the near future. He's a probable rival of Nathaniel. Perhaps, but the obvious lead is Nathaniel but as I have said I'm open to all plot twists. Catherine even smiled after the details of Sylvester closing the Cafe later than usual so she could stay a bit longer. She even thought of him as one of the (two) people who was civil with her. The woman. She came out of nowhere, but I reckon she was the woman in the prologue (given that I guessed right). Anyway, she seemed like an old woman at first, but then it was said she's not much older than her. In all of Catherine's struggle, she didn't get the fact (or didn't occur to her) that perhaps Jonathan told Catherine nothing about being a Keeper. It wouldn't have been hard to guess poor Catherine was clueless, especially the way she humored the woman and the way Catherine asked about the Keeper thing. Solas. He was a bit overconfident (in a good way) and likable like Nathaniel. He was interesting and was introduced rather nicely. A cheerful kind of prince, but formal when needed. A bit powerless despite being the prince. The way his mother treated him was harsh. His beliefs were shown and he seem to stand by them. In such a way,