It’s very enjoyable to “watch” the iconic music figures like Johnny Cash, Elvis, and the Everly Brothers interact with Roy Orbison.
There’s no doubt that Roy is a character that remains an iconic pioneer in the music industry. Films based on iconic musicians have been successful, such as WALK THE LINE.
However, it can be challenging to recreate a compelling life story that spans so many years. This is, unfortunately, what happens in his script. While there are strong moments, the overall script would benefit from more development.
The script spans Roy’s lifetime, but the script doesn’t produce enough compelling tension to sustain the overall plot. The script effectively tells various episodes or snippets of Roy’s life, but there isn’t a well-identified emotional theme or goal that drives the story.
The series of events don’t always feel fluidly connected. They feel more like moments from Roy’s life versus telling a rich and exciting story that reveals information about Roy that the audience may not know. …show more content…
Roy is reactive, but not very proactive as a character. Show more of his struggle, both externally and internally. Try to make Roy a more fascinating character. Show the audience what makes him a unique and special character. Like in the film GREAT BALLS OF FIRE, the character of Jerry Lee Lewis is bigger than life. The depiction of him as a “wild man” who doesn’t conform to society’s rules is well conveyed. This story focused more on his rise and fall, as the scandal about his marriage overcame his career. Again, the story focused more on one major aspect of the musician’s life story providing plenty of personal tension. The personal and professional stakes for Jerry Lee Lewis were well defined and very