Paradise Road Letter
Written Explanation:
'I chose to write in a creative style, employing conventions of format and style of a traditional letter. This allows me to express my ideas in a logical order while adopting a sophisticated tone.' 'I have chosen formal language in an attempt to demonstrate a comprehensive and thoughtful piece. Inclusive words such as 'we' and 'us' have been incorporated to allow me to connect with the audience. Furthermore, my use of first-person perspective aims to add credibility to my argument.' 'My piece is to be published in an anthology for VCE students familiar with the subject matter and texts. As they have familiarity with the concepts I discuss, I intend for readers to depart with a greater understanding and appreciation of the ideas in my written piece.' 'The purpose of this essay is to demonstrate that one conflict always contains the seed of another: firstly, that conflict can begin from small and eventually lead to bigger things and secondly conflict can become a huge burden when it tops up.' 'In this essay, I explored the idea that 'One Conflict always contains the seed of another ‘.
Imaginative
One conflict always contains the seed of another
1940
Dear friend,
I want to tell you about the troubles my women are facing here in the camp of the Japanese. As I am writing this letter to you my friend, you may not believe me, but it is a risk of losing my life if the men knew about this, very dangerous act on my behalf, I may face tremendous consequences.
All of us are treated like slave labour for the men, we grow their food crops in the blazing hot sun, we work until we drop dead. If we did not obey as they commanded they would beat and push us like animals till we worked again. If we refused once again we could face further punishment , death. Yes, not to mention, some of our women had unfortunately contracted malaria, yes not very pleasant, unfortunately I have lost my dear friend, I just can’t stop crying, she just went away from me
'I chose to write in a creative style, employing conventions of format and style of a traditional letter. This allows me to express my ideas in a logical order while adopting a sophisticated tone.' 'I have chosen formal language in an attempt to demonstrate a comprehensive and thoughtful piece. Inclusive words such as 'we' and 'us' have been incorporated to allow me to connect with the audience. Furthermore, my use of first-person perspective aims to add credibility to my argument.' 'My piece is to be published in an anthology for VCE students familiar with the subject matter and texts. As they have familiarity with the concepts I discuss, I intend for readers to depart with a greater understanding and appreciation of the ideas in my written piece.' 'The purpose of this essay is to demonstrate that one conflict always contains the seed of another: firstly, that conflict can begin from small and eventually lead to bigger things and secondly conflict can become a huge burden when it tops up.' 'In this essay, I explored the idea that 'One Conflict always contains the seed of another ‘.
Imaginative
One conflict always contains the seed of another
1940
Dear friend,
I want to tell you about the troubles my women are facing here in the camp of the Japanese. As I am writing this letter to you my friend, you may not believe me, but it is a risk of losing my life if the men knew about this, very dangerous act on my behalf, I may face tremendous consequences.
All of us are treated like slave labour for the men, we grow their food crops in the blazing hot sun, we work until we drop dead. If we did not obey as they commanded they would beat and push us like animals till we worked again. If we refused once again we could face further punishment , death. Yes, not to mention, some of our women had unfortunately contracted malaria, yes not very pleasant, unfortunately I have lost my dear friend, I just can’t stop crying, she just went away from me