Personal Narrative
Where am I, what happened , why am I so dizzy, why don't I remember anything that has happened, what day is it, why am I so hungry, and is there any light in here?.
I finally started to remember what happened before I got to this random place. There was some loud sound. Coming from a blackish silver weapon, kinda small but could kill someone in a matter of seconds. Kids were crying and screaming for their parents, and parents were crying and screaming for their children. Then there was the people who were yelling at people to give them their money. I remember trying to help my mom after she got shot. She had a gun in her hand so I took it and shot a guy in the head. That was the last thing I can remember from that night. I don't …show more content…
I was just under pressure. I wasn't sure what to do..."
Slap!
Voice 2: "Ouch what was that for?"
Voice 1: " because you are a stupid son and I wish I never had you!"
Door slams shut!
Wow that was an interesting,I wonder who that was... Maybe if I can remember what their voices sounded like and I escape I can tell the police how they sounded and they will be locked up for eternity. Wait! What if I never get out of here. What if this is my death spot. What happens if I never get to see my family again. What about my mom, is she okay? Is she safe?
(Door creeps open)
Voice 2: "Hey, I'm not hear to harm you. I don't know about my father any more. Here's some of your food you can eat. I don't want you to starve." ( Door Closes slowly)
Voice 1: " I have a plan to help you escape. You have to trust me. I know that you can't see anymore but it's for the best. I promise. My father is abusive to me. He never wanted me, he wanted a girl. And now he wants a 14 year old girl. To replace me... So you can trust me I promise." I replied, "Then tell me where I am, what the place I'm at looks like, and maybe then I'll trust you. But if you don't then I am not gonna trust you. I mean I can barely …show more content…
Door slams open!
Voice one:
"Come on it's time to go, get up and hurry. We don't have long!
5 hours later... Voice 1: "Okay well we just got to the highway and my father doesn't even know that there's a highway around here. I want you to get some rest and I'll stay up to watch for the police. When there is a police officer I'll get you up and we can leave. Deal?." I relied "Deal." And went to sleep.
Voice 1: Wake Up, come on wake up! The police are here. They are here to save us. Come on hurry up!
Police: "Are you Molly. The one that was at the shooting at Walmart?" I replied, "yes sir that was me. I was held hostage by his father."
Police: "Who's father?"
Voice 1: "Mine. "
Police: Where do you live, show me the way kid. And Josh take Molly to the station. Her mother is already there waiting for her. She will then take Molly home and this little guy will be going to jail as well as his
I finally started to remember what happened before I got to this random place. There was some loud sound. Coming from a blackish silver weapon, kinda small but could kill someone in a matter of seconds. Kids were crying and screaming for their parents, and parents were crying and screaming for their children. Then there was the people who were yelling at people to give them their money. I remember trying to help my mom after she got shot. She had a gun in her hand so I took it and shot a guy in the head. That was the last thing I can remember from that night. I don't …show more content…
I was just under pressure. I wasn't sure what to do..."
Slap!
Voice 2: "Ouch what was that for?"
Voice 1: " because you are a stupid son and I wish I never had you!"
Door slams shut!
Wow that was an interesting,I wonder who that was... Maybe if I can remember what their voices sounded like and I escape I can tell the police how they sounded and they will be locked up for eternity. Wait! What if I never get out of here. What if this is my death spot. What happens if I never get to see my family again. What about my mom, is she okay? Is she safe?
(Door creeps open)
Voice 2: "Hey, I'm not hear to harm you. I don't know about my father any more. Here's some of your food you can eat. I don't want you to starve." ( Door Closes slowly)
Voice 1: " I have a plan to help you escape. You have to trust me. I know that you can't see anymore but it's for the best. I promise. My father is abusive to me. He never wanted me, he wanted a girl. And now he wants a 14 year old girl. To replace me... So you can trust me I promise." I replied, "Then tell me where I am, what the place I'm at looks like, and maybe then I'll trust you. But if you don't then I am not gonna trust you. I mean I can barely …show more content…
Door slams open!
Voice one:
"Come on it's time to go, get up and hurry. We don't have long!
5 hours later... Voice 1: "Okay well we just got to the highway and my father doesn't even know that there's a highway around here. I want you to get some rest and I'll stay up to watch for the police. When there is a police officer I'll get you up and we can leave. Deal?." I relied "Deal." And went to sleep.
Voice 1: Wake Up, come on wake up! The police are here. They are here to save us. Come on hurry up!
Police: "Are you Molly. The one that was at the shooting at Walmart?" I replied, "yes sir that was me. I was held hostage by his father."
Police: "Who's father?"
Voice 1: "Mine. "
Police: Where do you live, show me the way kid. And Josh take Molly to the station. Her mother is already there waiting for her. She will then take Molly home and this little guy will be going to jail as well as his