Personal Narrative: A Day In Hawaii

On a humid, winter day in Hawaii, Mike decided to hit the road in his Infiniti qx60 with his friend Patrick. Patrick knew Mike well, because they play lacrosse together. Patrick had just moved to Hawaii. Pat is sixteen and Mike is eighteen years old. They went to a brand new theme park called Flyin Hawaiian very early in the morning, and tried to beat a record of going on 42 roller coasters in one day! They went to Screamin Splash first because that ride looked the most interesting. The line was long, but they were prepared. They’d bought Lines-less cards. Other people also bought lineless cards so they were in line for two to three minutes. Mike bought cotton candy for the wait. They precisely watched the first row go up and drop into the water. Splash! “Please put all your valuables in a locker,” said the announcer. Mike was just stuffing sweetness to his mouth at the time.
The two boys were inpatient to go on the ride. “ Line A, you may take the raft, and always remember to get wet,”said the announcer. Normally that’s not the rule, the rule is to stay safe. Pat and Mike took
“Again”? asked Pat. “Are you crazy? I lost my phone from that ride.” Pat wanted to go, but Mike lost interest. “Can I see your wet phone?” Felix asked. Then, all Mike pulled out was a phone-like piece of cardboard. “ You actually thought I didn’t have a lifeproof case?” On the other side of his pocket was an iPhone 5s in a green lifeproof case. “You see, I’m smart unlike you.” Says the one that was screaming as loud as possible.” “Fine, I’ll go on the ride again, and again, and again, and again.” The fast passes were a little bit of a waste of money because all Mike and Pat did was go on Screamin Splash. But, the fast passes were also useful because the lines were very long. Although Pat and Mike didn’t quite beat the record of going on 42 roller coasters in a day, they probably have beaten a record for going on Screaming