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Personal Narrative-A Teeth Cgratory Moment
A Teeth Clenching Moment

It was a warm spring day and there was a small breeze. I was on a band trip to Six Flags that I had been waiting for all year. Me and some friends were waiting in line for the Texas Giant. It would be the biggest roller-coaster I had ever rode. I wasn’t a big fan of roller-coaster because I had barely been on any before. It was almost our turn to go, and I asked myself, “can I really do this?” Roller-coasters were one of my fears, I didn’t think I could do it, We just got on the ride and I looked up and thought that I was crazy for getting on it.
We had just gone around the first turn and then I heard a click, we had begun to go up. I looked up and my stomach dropped. I looked to my friend sitting next to me
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