Personal Narrative: My Octopus Ride

This is Christian Schultz reporting from Six Flags Great America in Gurnee, Illinois. I can't believe it, I might faint because they took out The Octopus ride and are going to replace it with a new ride called The Joker. I saw a fence bordering around the area where the new ride was going to be installed, and next to the fence I saw a sign that said “please don`t mind our dust.” At this time, it is vague about what kind of ride it will be. Well, enough about that other ride, let's talk about the other new ride, it`s called The Church of DOOM!! I was hasty to make this the first ride I went on. While I was waiting in line I looked around the ride, and it looked like a mock cathedral because it had stain glass windows, a high ceiling, and fancy
My legs were starting to get tired because I had been walking for hours. The next ride I wanted to go on was the train because I would get to relax. I had to be punctual to the station because the next train was leaving in ten minutes. When the train was moving from the station, I peered behind my seat and the rides looked like they were shrinking. During the train ride, we passed a hut where the employees hang out when they have a break. Then we came across an orchard where I saw about forty people there with ten baskets and about twenty apples in each basket. I was baffled because I don't remember Six Flags having an orchard before. I got off the train when it stopped. Then I went to one of the maps to find the alley that leads to the one stage that is in a hard to find spot. I didn't want to be poky or I would be late to hear the quartet playing Elvis` songs. I loved listening to the songs and I never wanted it to end. After the show I was going to resume riding the rides but I tripped and fell. After I got up, I looked at my ankle and it was swelling up so I decided to end my trip here at Six Flags. This is Christian Schultz signing off to get some