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Personal Narrative: Blosformia
The shrieking sound of my bed pierced my ears as I rolled over to the “colder” side. Peeking through my bedroom window, was a ray of the rising sun who softly kissed my face as I wistfully arose from my slumber. A burst of summer breeze blew over my body stretching out my bones as it fell upon my skin. I sit up on my rusted bunk and take in a deep breath, as I exhaled, I tell myself that I’m releasing all of the negativity in my body. It’s my therapy.
I’ve come up with numerous techniques to keep myself positive since my diagnosis. Blosformia, a rare genetic disease causing my retinas to slowly shrink, became an uninvited guest in my body at age 12. In the course of six years my vision dissipated completely. I tell myself “I’m not impaired, I’m empowered” . I have even learned to answer the questions I believe to be the utmost ignorant, with more pride than attitude.
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“Lucy, you are blind, but you can see. You can see more than any being with perfect vision, because you see with your heart, and your heart only.”
I had to say it just like that and third person and all. Mama Odie said that as long as I say it like that, even after she's long gone, I will feel her spirit through the mirror and it will give me all the strength I need. A few months ago after my eighteenth birthday, she became a butterfly. On her deathbed she told me that she was going to nurture the blind children in Heaven. She held on long enough until I was legally able to care for myself. Through that I learned that everyone put in your life is there for a reason and when that purpose is achieved, they will leave you.
I still say my daily promise even on my worst days. It's like my body refuses to step foot out of the house without if I didn’t. Today, as every other day I said my devotions, taking in the spirits of Mama Odie and my mother in the process, then headed out the door to conquer the grounds of the Louisiana

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