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Personal Narrative-First Hill
I sprinted off the start line and was engulfed in the sound of all the runners, their feet pounding against the pavement. Adrenaline coursed through my veins. I turned right and began to ascend the first hill of the MT SAC invitational two mile course. As I continued up the hill, the rhythmic thuds of the runners’ steps decelerated as everyone settled into a steadier pace. I whizzed past the first mile marker, my surroundings a blur and the wind rushing around me. Then came the second hill. I discovered that I had overexerted myself. My brisk pace slowed. One minuscule step felt like a million. My throat felt raw, and my head was pounding. One of my teammates approached me .
“Hi Serena ,” she called,” you can do this .” “Thank you . Best


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