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Personal Narrative: My Immune System
As a young child, I tended to become ill often. The doctors blamed my weak immune system on the fact that I contracted mononucleosis and was hospitalized for two months at a young age. The consensus was that over time my immune system would improve and I would outgrow any other issues. I continued to get very ill with bleeding sores constantly lining my mouth and throat throughout my elementary schooling. I noticed my condition was drastically worsening as I ended my sophomore year of highschool. I entered my junior year chronically ill. I missed over thirty percent of the year due to being so ill. I went almost all of junior year teaching myself the information my peers were able to learn in class. I became so physically tired that even getting out of bed was exhausting. I was living with such pain that my parents decided to seek the top …show more content…
I worked extremely hard during that time to maintain a cumulative GPA of 3.82. I kept up with all school work and the commitments I made to clubs, sports, and volunteer work. While most people would have given up and lost hope, I was determined to wake up everyday and do as much as I physically could to keep up with the rest of my peers. I wanted to still participate in high school and experience all it had to offer. After junior year, I dedicated ten weeks of my summer vacation to take two college courses. I achieved an “A” in both courses for an overall 4.0 GPA to start my college career. I took these, not just to get a taste of what college is like, but to make up for the time I missed in class during high school. I still wanted to learn as much as I could and seized every educational opportunity during my new found healthy life. With my treatment plan and the support from my family, I am able to live an active life and I am proud to say that I never let my illness stop me from living a successful

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