Personal Narrative: My Trip To The Community Pool

At the age of eight, being the oblivious, simple minded child I was, I nearly died. On the day of July seventh, in 2012. My mom, sister, two irrelevant brother half brothers, and my dad, decided to go to the community pool. It was our first time speaking of, we already had a pool in our backyard, however we still decided it’d be fun. There were many people there, and the pool was huge, yet oddly shaped. It was a huge square on the right side, and the deep end was a rectangular shape in the middle, then the other side was a regular shape. Knowing me of course I was very attracted to the rectangular part, but my mom said, “You aren’t old enough to swim over there.” I frowned. I had in two pigtails and a one piece bathing suit. I definitely felt too young as well. So then, I took out my pigtails, removed my floaties, and finally sat in the shallow part of the water. My brothers laughed at the disappointment all over my face as they were diving into the deep end. Only a couple of people were in the deep end, and the number footage was on the pool
I attempted to “swim” to the edge of the pool, but I found it way too difficult. I was screaming until I realized my lungs slowly started to shut down. So I shut my mouth, and kept my eyes closed, I Wasn't too familiar with chlorine to open my eyes in it. I could hear kicking and splashing, as I was under… I could feel four hands were grabbing me by my arms and waist. Possibly even six hands. While I was pulled from the water there was a large crowd of people… many, many people. It felt weird and embarrassing with all eyes on the girl who nearly drowned. My eyes opened wide, there they were, the two inferior teenage boys rescued me from the pool. Who laughed at me for not having an ability like they did. I was coughing, and my mouth had an icky taste to it, including the fact that I had the hiccups, It was absolutely