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Personal Narrative: The Beginning: When I Joined A Team
The Beginning When we joined the team, we were put with a friend from band, this kid we didn't know, and somebody from Ally's math class. Things were great over the summer. My band friend, Liam, was very close to me at the time so we would always talk about our ideas but that sort of left us cut off from the rest of the team. Of course I would talk to Ally but it was nowhere near the amount towards Liam. During the year, she started getting close to him too and I no longer felt like I could say my thoughts. This wasn't really a problem because I could just write all my thoughts in the journal since Ally randomly stopped doing it and I had to pick up after her. By this time, I was starting to take charge of the team because Liam was never
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