Personal Narrative: The League Of Agents

Once upon a time there was a kid named Carter. He was a tall 13 year old. He had glasses and was very smart. His hair was as red as a fox and he had on a red shirt with black khakis. He was the son of Bruce Walter. Bruce was a very wicked person. He had once been a secret agent, but was shot by a laser which turned him wicked and pretty evil. Carter decided he was going to be a teenage secret agent. When he turned 13 him and his sister- Daphne- were drafted into the League of Agents for Students (LAS). The school was built in 2011. It is now August 15, 2015. The LAS director, Willie Berg, had installed buttons in Carters and Daphne’s lockers so they can make their way to the base. Carter pressed the button and it scanned his ID. All of a sudden
You six are our new agents. You will soon get to know each other, but for now we will introduce the co founders kids. You will have to be elite and strong in the battle field. Now, stand in a line against that wall.” explained Willie.
All the kids stood along the wall and stood straight. All the kids didn’t smile because they were all trained to not smile while being trained by their parents.
The team members are Carter, Daphne, Beth, Michael, Nathan, and Eve. They all said their hello’s and then Willie started talking.
“Okay. Now you all are to go home until a mission is called out. Carter you are the head of the team so I will call you out first. Then we will call the team. All your gadgets will be put down on this shelf on your name,” Willie added.
Carter stepped back into his locker elevator and pressed the return button. Carter was kubda excited. He hasn't seen his dad in 3 years and this was his chance. His mom knew he was going to join the league to fight his father, but she didn't know Daphne was going to do
His plan was to go to the backup base where his assistant, Agent Howell, will meet the new team. They ran all the way to the airplane hanger. They got in the jet with everything worth value and will help defeat the LAS. The driver insisted that they drive the limousine just to be safe, but Willie insisted on flying.
An hour later they arrived at the backup base. It was located on a chateau 150 miles west of the base. When they got off the jet, they ran off the helipad. Carter had to get ahold of his mom to tell her to call Mr. Saben to tell him he’d be late.
After the event Willie drove Carter to band. He arrived just in time to perform. Daphne stayed at the concessions asking people for money and Willie was looking for Bruce. The competition ended with the Statenburg Marching Panthers winning overall. After that Willie drove the kids back home and explained to their mother what was going on.
“ Their dad broke into the school today,” explained Willie,” but we ended up in lock down.”
“I didn’t realize he was out of house arrest yet.” said