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Personal Reflection: My Evolving As A Writer
Evolving as a writer My personal reflection paper was a fun paper to write. I enjoyed reflecting on my childhood, but more so I am enjoying the learning experience. I have found that I am not as terrible in certain areas as I believed I was; however, I have learned some new areas I need to work on. My punctuation needs some work as well as my word choices; on the other hand, I have good sentence combining and I provide examples to illustrate my claims. I will better myself in the obvious areas that need work; similarly, I will continue to better myself in the areas I am strong at because there is always room for improvement. I will concentrate on working on my punctuation and word choices. When it comes to punctuation I still need some work on my commas. I need to watch for comma splices and remember to add commas where needed. To better myself in this area I will read specifically about commas on pages 282-297 in The Little, Brown …show more content…

I provided sentence combining by using coordinating conjunctions and conjunctive adverbs. For example, when I wrote the sentence “The small town itself did not bother me; nevertheless, what had brought us there did bother me.” I combined the sentence using the word nevertheless. Another example sentence is “Everyone who knew her had nothing but kind words to say about her; however, she was far from perfect.” The use of the word however combines the sentence. I provided examples to illustrate my claims by describing in detail when I talked about my stepmom on how I saw her at first when she grounded me from television and when she sent me to bed without any dessert. Then how she stepped up as a mother by taking care of me when I was sick and by giving advice when I needed it. Giving examples help the reader to understand more about what you are writing and also helps paint a better picture for the reader to

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