Falling Action: He breaks into a his Dad’s palace after he finds out his Dad had lied about everything.
Climax: Ace finds out his dad is the dictator and goes to confront him.
Inciting Incident: Cedric Brimble the dictator brutally murders wife for treason. Ace is on a search for his Dad when he sees the headlines. he will bite at anything even if there is a very small chance of it being his Dad’s Wife.
Backstory First Person:
I was abandoned by my parents when I was 9 months old. I have wanted to find my parents for a very long time, even if they are stinky old drunks. I have one friend named Gavin that has been with me since the first time I stepped foot in the orphanage. He is always cracking jokes and care free. I am planning to leave the orphanage , but I have a hunch that Gavin is trying to keep me from something.
Backstory Third Person:
Ace was abandoned by his parents when he was only 9 months old. He is on a quest to find his parents, …show more content…
even if they could be stinky old drunks. He has only one friend and he is the only person he can trust. They have been friends since the first time Ace stepped foot in the orphanage. Gavin is the hilarious friend that makes the most of bad situations. After Ace says he is planning to leave the orphanage Gavin objects. Ace has a hunch that Gavin is trying to keep him from something.
Climax First Person:
Dad you're Cedric Brimble are you kidding.
I can’t believe you you killed millions. What about mom is she an evil scientist that works for you. What the hell. I have been looking for you for my whole life just to find out that your worse than a stinky old drunk. Yet here I am disappointed. Son I know this looks really bad, but I did it for you. If I didn’t kill the real Cedric Brimble I wouldn’t have been able to keep you safe. I had to put a show up and be bad for four years. Cedric had been targeting our family for years. We had taken everything from him when he was younger. Or our grandparents grandparents had. They had been the leader of a british resistance. That raided the Brimble’s house and killed his parents. Cedric was enraged and had wanted revenge ever since. So you have been in power for 4 years and didn’t even stop bye the orphanage. I know you couldn’t have brought me back to your palace but you could have just said
hi.
Climax Third Person:
Ace was speechless. “ Dad you're Cedric Brimble, the mass murdering dictator.” “What about mom where is she is she your evil scientist or something.” He said enraged. “What the hell Dad I have been looking for you my whole life just to find out your worse then what I ever could have imagined.” He said.
“Son I know it looks bad but I did this for you.” His Dad said.” If I didn’t kill the really Cedric Brimble I couldn’t have kept you safe all these years.” He said.” Cedric had been targeting our family for years.” he yelled.” My grandparents had been the leaders of a resistance, we had finally had a opening to assassinate the brimbles.” he said sadly.” We raided the Brimbles palace and killed Cedric’s parents.” He was enraged and swore revenge.”
“ So you have been in power for four years and didn’t have the decency to even stop bye the orphanage.” Ace yelled. “ I know you couldn’t have brought me back, but you could have just said hi.”