I close my essay with “ ‘You know what they say… Love is the main reason for murder,’ was written on her notebook when they searched her apartment after the murder.” This piece of the paper was that twist that I’ve always loved in …show more content…
In the essay The Identity of Marji i had run-ons and fragments along with The Memories That Make Me paper. Whereas in my Rhetorical Analysis essay I have little to no run-ons and fragments. Likewise, I have grown more consistent with my work. Such as sticking to one topic throughout a paragraph. I believe the reasoning behind this is because I have started to write rough drafts and have the papers proofread for feedback by classmates. However, I have not went to the Writing Center because my ostc schedules makes that slightly harder compared to last year. In spite of not being able to make it to the writing center the in-class proofreading sessions are very helpful to