What’s Working: Overall I think the story is ambitious. The vampire thing has been done before but I have not read a story about a vampire who is working as a model. I think the tension and challenges the narrator has to overcome make him stronger by the end of the story. I liked how the author made the vampire give into his temptation. I thought it was a nice way to progress the story by having the vampire hold off eating anyone until he couldn’t wait any
What’s Working: Overall I think the story is ambitious. The vampire thing has been done before but I have not read a story about a vampire who is working as a model. I think the tension and challenges the narrator has to overcome make him stronger by the end of the story. I liked how the author made the vampire give into his temptation. I thought it was a nice way to progress the story by having the vampire hold off eating anyone until he couldn’t wait any